eg.:sometiomes you do not have so many things to buy so you'd take your closest small stores bocoz in large stores you've to walk a long way to the cashier coz its too large in area and you've to stand in a long queue .all this will cost more time than going to a small store.
please correct my example to begin with becoz that is not pure English,and give me your own answers.....thanx by a chinese
2006-08-31
03:11:19
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do you think any scentence of mine goes wrong? having mistakes or not pure english
would you help me with correcting?
2006-08-31
03:30:50 ·
update #1
gin your answer is great and special
is english your 1st language ?
and one more question.. buy something as
a tv in a small store ,are you sure they'd offer you same good quality and after-sevice?
2006-08-31
03:40:49 ·
update #2
to katydint:
i appreciate your answer so much,so do your advice,i am practicing Engish becoz I am trying to migrate to Australia,and that
requires a successful IELTs test result to start with.Again,thank u for being so helpful and so friendly ...I love language tooo,but I've nerver got a chance to let it come up to a satisfactory level,and my preparetion for migariton gives me an excuse to put energy into it.and hopefully thay is on pure emotion
2006-08-31
03:54:54 ·
update #3