Countdown 1- 15
(1) I want you in my world (2) I need ya in my world (3) we can change the world (4) ever me and you are together (5) times I wrote this because I know if u wrote it, you would (6) rehearsals like you do when you‘re nervous(7) rounds of you like an alcoholic numba (8) cuz it’s symbolic ima keep you on alert just like (9) eleven I got (10) words I need to say to you, here they are: I love you, I need you, I wish you were here. (11) days of the worst (12) deep we always look like a team (13) hataz for each of us (14) bitches wanna be us (15) ****** need us….. (To be continued)
2006-08-30 15:13:59 · 10 answers · asked by cgychele 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
when u countdown the highest number should be first and end in 1
2006-08-30 15:15:34 · answer #1 · answered by v-ballgurl 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2016-12-06 00:35:26 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont really get it. but some real words would help. also a countdown goes from biggest to smallest.
2006-08-30 18:18:28 · answer #3 · answered by lady beth 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good.
Friends.
2006-08-30 15:15:51 · answer #4 · answered by Lucy Lu 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow hon!!!!!
what a lucky friend! keep it up. and you know what..... if you like it thats what matters because you know what you have with this "friend"
good luck =)
2006-08-30 15:18:01 · answer #5 · answered by natty 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
no offense im lost
2006-08-30 15:37:41 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
kool
2006-08-30 15:17:28 · answer #7 · answered by alex 13 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Uhhh...no offense, but what is this?
2006-08-30 15:15:40 · answer #8 · answered by amoroushotmama 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok
2006-08-30 15:17:18 · answer #9 · answered by NONAME 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont get it...
2006-08-30 15:15:31 · answer #10 · answered by 123 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋