Well, I like to write. I got ideas but don't know what to do.
#1. 12 year old Carrie lost both there mom and dad in a fire. They have moved several times. They now live with there uncle. When they feel at home they see ghosts. Carrie tries to solve the mystery without her uncle and aunt finds out and moves.
#2. 10 year old Complicado is a ghost student. He plays tricks changes grades to A's, and take over teachers bodies. But, it all changes when he meets a ghost teacher.
#3. Segredo, a 8 year old and his family look forward to there vacation. But, the vacation gets filled with scary things.
2006-08-30 11:12:31 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I am writing #1. I want to give thanks to bookworm. I thought 1 was easyest and most interesting to me.
2006-08-30 11:39:39 · update #1
well you seem to know what you like. all those involve ghosts and the like. there are a million different people out there and a million different tastes. write to please yourself.
2006-08-30 11:18:35 · answer #1 · answered by bookworm 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
If you write about the first one, don't use the name Carry with fire. Sounds a bit to much like the Steven King movie Carrie.
2006-08-30 11:42:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have a good imagination! I think all the ideas would work and that you might find a good market for them in young adult fiction. I actually think #2 is cute and is filled with possibilities. Keep writing and I wish you success!
2006-08-30 12:49:02 · answer #3 · answered by LuckySaj 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like #2 best. Good potential for conflict as well as fun.
It is true that you have made grammatical mistakes, but they way to improve is by reading and writing, so you are well on your way. Don't get discouraged, just keep writing and developing your ideas. No matter which one you choose here, make sure you complete it. Good luck.
2006-08-30 11:23:14 · answer #4 · answered by Bright Light 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
More than 55% of the population are baby-boomers. People born in the mid to late forties and early 50's and more of them are getting into sci-fi/fantasy than ever before. So, you might want to try your hand at fantasy or sci-fi. Good Luck!
2006-08-30 11:42:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1 is more developed of a story, but is a tad bit cliche.
2 sounds interesting, but the lack of description doesn't make it sound too exciting, develop it more, and probably make the protagonist a bit more mischevious
3 is cliche, and doesn't sound that intersting at all. Too predictable sounding from the description.
2006-08-30 11:25:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No way you are a writer. You don't even know how to use the proper form of "their" in your descriptions.
Get past the 4th grade and then come back with your stories.
2006-08-30 11:19:40 · answer #7 · answered by heshootshescores3 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe number 2 is intersting.
2006-08-30 11:17:31 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
#2 appeals to me the most
2006-08-30 11:21:01 · answer #9 · answered by LoveLife 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think you should write all 3
but make sure they have surprise endings
those are the best
2006-08-30 11:25:31 · answer #10 · answered by heathermcdavis19 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋