Rate poem 1-10 with 10 being awesome poem.
Pirate
Her
Have I loved
And here I dwindle
To nothingness
As she belongs
Within a symmetrical world
Who places this definition
Upon her
Whom I loved
My hope
Is now a buried treasure.
2006-08-30 01:41:06 · 5 answers · asked by catzrme 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
quite nice,i like the first line its strong and gets you straight to the point,i dont like the word "judge" when it comes to art,i would say 8
2006-08-30 02:01:06 · answer #1 · answered by Semiramis 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2006-08-30 02:05:50 · answer #2 · answered by FRIEND 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem 9
2006-08-30 01:52:40 · answer #3 · answered by Ash888 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a 5, it is a good start but it needs work, for example "Her" could start off as she
2006-08-30 01:57:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great
2006-08-30 02:03:35 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋