i am trying to pick one of these poems to put on my page but i am not sure which one is the best.
2006-08-29 11:39:54 · 15 answers · asked by Common Sense 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
I love you
I really never knew you
you were just another friend
but when i got to know you
i let my heart unbend
i couldnt help past memories
that would only make me cry
i had to forget my 1st love
and give love another tgry
so ive fallen in love w/ u
& ill never let u go
i love u more than any1
i just had to let u know
& if you ever wonder why
i dont know what ill say
but ill never stop loving u each and everyday
my feelings for you will never change
just know my feelings are true
just remember one thing
i love you
this is the first one
2006-08-29 11:44:27 · update #1
Ten thousand times
ten thousand times, i have seen your face
when you pass me in the hall
ten thousand times, i have wanted to say "hi"
ten thousand times, i have seen your smile
but it was not for me
Ten thousand times, i have tried to run into you as you were going up the stairs
ten thousand times, my heart beats when you are near
ten thousand times, i have always seemed to fail in everything i do
Ten thousand times, i have looked in your eyes
and got lost in their browness
ten thousand times, ten thousand smiles
ten thousand ways, ten thousand heartbeats
but i still have not succeeded
ten thousand times i have failed but i still
love you
2006-08-29 11:49:51 · update #2
last one(written 2001)
LIFES UNFAIR
I am 15
and noone even notices me
Y does he not talk to me
Just passes by without looking
Y do i not have enough courage to ask him out or say "hi"
Life's Unfair
Y do i get in trouble when him and i get into a fight
Is it my fault he is a cry baby
Y does she not act like my mom
fair and get rid of her favoritism
I know he is her favorite
Life's Unfair
Y can i not talk to my dad
or write him a letter
Y do i have to block him out of my life
he is my dad
Y can i not do what i wanna do
Y do i have to listen to you
Life's Unfair
2006-08-29 11:54:02 · update #3
Note to a great friend
Y must this friendship end?
Y cant we give it one more chance?
Note to a great friend
We were connected like Paris and France
We had alot of good times
Note to a great friend
The road was smooth, in the past times
but now it got so rough
Note to a great friend
When we were togher, life wasnt so tough
My life was so fine
Note to a great friend
Ill try not to cry
if this friendship has to end, but please....
Note to a great friend
consider this, just consider
How we used to be great friends
2006-08-29 11:59:42 · update #4
these 4 poems i have had copywritten and have been published in books. I am the writer and just want one to put on my authors page. Help me out please!!!!
2006-08-29 12:01:52 · update #5
I only see the first poem but I like it
2006-08-29 11:46:54 · answer #1 · answered by Kristin Pregnant with #4 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Looking at the empty page,
I continue sittin,
Trying to chose from poems,
you have not written,
So without any further adieu,
I think the best is number two
2006-08-29 19:46:32 · answer #2 · answered by rikenelson 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
hey I'm a poet writer too one and only at my school wanna share some? my e-mail address is badboys_newageoutlaw2000@yahoo.com
2006-08-29 18:43:35 · answer #3 · answered by image of the invisible 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ummm.... you forgot the poems
2006-08-29 18:43:21 · answer #4 · answered by SUzyQ 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
What poems?
2006-08-29 18:42:12 · answer #5 · answered by *GoldenGirl* 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Christy baby, there are no poems!!
2006-08-29 18:43:10 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
dont see no poems
2006-08-29 18:43:04 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Your blonde really shows.
2006-08-29 18:43:41 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like 'em . . . short & right to the point.. Here is one I wrote that is similar: " "
2006-08-29 18:42:49 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
there is only one,....and it is a little corny,dont u think ?
2006-08-29 18:45:49 · answer #10 · answered by cassey s 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋