ok here's a shot at sci-fi then?

Question

When i was very young (7 or so) i created a story that i still work on to this day. It has become a kind of never ending story.

I'll break it down as much as i can but please bare with me

This was first created in about 1980 and a lot of tv and movies inspired the story.

We have explored the solar system. we have people on every planet and most of the moons. But earth is running out of resources. Unsure what to do since most of the other planents cant replace earth, we start looking at ways to explore outside of our solar system.

However there is another dimension where a queen of evil wants our universe. Now it wasnt till recently thagt i built this next part but this is why. Millions and millions of years ago, humanity came from a planet called Zogaria. On it there was good and evil.

But there was a queen and king. The queen was influenced by evil and killed the king. Fearing revolt by the people and wanting power, she fled zogaria to this other dimension. However she

had two children. at some point.
One was taken from her by a good person and one was left with her to be raised evil.

So now, when earth is in danger of resources, the queen visits earth to offer help. But it is all a lie. She uses a assasination attempt to call for war.

In the later part of the story i said that she knew her other son (she learned of) was on earth and that if the two brothers ever met they could destroy her.

So humanity is nearly wiped out by this enemy and flees to the stars.

This starts a very very long war, where the son who was one of the few survivors must start to rebuild humanity and fight back.

the first part of the story was the wars between the two dimensions.. many new allies and planets are explored.


Then about 5 years ago i throught it might be time to end this story and i hneeded a way to do so. The two brothers, neither knowing they were related untill then, found out the truth. when they confront their mother the queen of evil

she dies.

well as peace seems to finally reign, there are new enemies that appear in the universe.. Pirates, nazis, and more.
Now the new peace will bring the two sides together to fight to preserve it.

But when the other brother dies (this story gets really weird becuase both have died many times but through cloning can be reborn) of age (and something else) a evil general will take his place.

Now this general wants one more show down. All out war for the universe.

But a new allie from Zogaria (it turns out) shows up and saves us. Finally the enemy is defeated.

At first this was gonna be the end of the story and my main char (not the son) in the story at this time visits zogaria to see where it all began.

But then about a year later i had a new idea.

What if since Zogaria was where humanity began (a kind of heaven) what if there was a hell and a devil.

The master of evil.. armed with weapons we have never faced before attacks, nearly wins too. and begins what

what is so far now become a 60 million year from the day the queen visited earth, war between good and evil.

anyway just curious what yaul think of that.

for the blind ones this is a question learn to read.

Answer 1

This is a rambling excerpt from something you have written and NOT a question. No one has time to read this nor comment upon it. Reported.

Answer 2

Great start! My first novel, "Progeny", started out when I was in high school (1986-1990) but I never finished it until two years ago. It's available through my publisher AuthorHouse as well as any online retailer.

I did realize when I went back to the manuscript after fifteen years that the story was still effective, but I needed to polish it because I didn't want it to SEEM dated. It worked, and as I kept asking "What happens next?" I wrote and wrote it into a novel. You've got a great story here, and I'd be happy to help you fine tune it as I can without keeping this from being YOUR story.

If you're looking for a publisher after you're done or want some help organizing things now, feel free to check out AuthorHouse. I certainly don't regret it!

Answer 3

A+++++++++++++

Answer 4

What's the question? But if you are just sharing, keep going with the story. Break it down to serial.

Answer 5

it's a very simple story line, maybe more suitable for the monthly graphic novel genre (comic book), than a book proper.

Answer 6

Ummmmmm have you considered making this into a series of books instead of one ginormous book? That's all.

Answer 7

Is there a question here?

Answer 8

Your question is?