I watched you walk out of my world
you were on your own track
there was no turning back
no hope left inside as our friendship died
CHORUS
Oh babe I'm missing you, please tell me how to mend the fragments of our broken dreams
What more could I say that would make you stay forever and always.
I said the wrong thing
My words left their sting
An aching pain in your heart
Can it ever be healed
I know its broken and torn apart
CHORUS
If you were back in my world
I would tell you the things
you most wanted to hear
I would dry those tears
and calm those fears in your heart
CHOURUS
How can you say just walk away
People who are not friends don't talk
So please tell me then
How do we mend
Our friendship once so true
Show me the right track back to you
CHORUS
You were my Angel
With the blue sparkling eyes
You will be my Angel
Till stars no longer shine
I'le walk the long and lonley track the track with no end untill I'm once again with you my Angel my frien
2006-08-29 07:42:57 · 18 answers · asked by Lyn I 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I wrote the song for some one on here who asked for a song based on the letter she posted earlier, I have emailed it to her as it is, I am waiting for my neice or son to add the music as they can do that. I don't know my doh from my fah lol. thanks for all your kind comments. x
2006-08-29 08:52:43 · update #1
its really good but be careful about posting your work on the internet people might steal it and say it was theirs
2006-08-29 07:45:31 · answer #1 · answered by Dana 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
In medical school they had to take notes really fast. Becoming a doctor is not that easy now, The speed of their writing messep up their handwriting And they don't care about it after becoming a doctor.
2016-03-27 00:19:02 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good but I think you have the chorus too many times, it will drag out the song. Trust me as a singer it will be boring and i wont want to sing it. but very good! i like it alot; i think it fits alot of people's lives (mine included...)
2006-08-29 07:52:18 · answer #3 · answered by swimmergirl4@verizon.net 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, until there is a melody to go along with it, it isn't a song, its a poem. It's okay though.
2006-08-29 07:48:15 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
Wish I could hear it with the music!
Best of luck to ya!
I wish I could write songs. . .
2006-08-29 07:45:39 · answer #5 · answered by sweets 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice, good job.
on a constructive note, it may be a little long with a bit much chorus, but it's yours so go with how it feels.
What chords you using?
2006-08-29 07:49:14 · answer #6 · answered by stratplayer1967 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cute.
2006-08-29 07:46:15 · answer #7 · answered by sweet.pjs1 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great song.
2006-08-29 07:45:10 · answer #8 · answered by Santana D 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good but a little typical.
2006-08-29 07:46:40 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Watch out, not bad, not at all. Good stuff.
2006-08-29 08:05:33 · answer #10 · answered by a7xrios 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋