plzzzzzzzz! I need lots and lots of help!?

Question

Dear Diary,
Today, we had a family reunion. Our grandmas, grandpas, cousins, uncles and aunts are all there.
We grathered in a very big restaurant, even though the restaurant is so big, the foods are extremely awful.Don't even mention those waiters and waitresses, they had bad attitude and bad manners, even worse, they smoke. And I don't know why, I think very time the world's most unfortunate things happended to me every time. When I spilled the milk on my pants, and I called a waiter to get me some tissues, but the restaurant didn't have tissues! While the adults kept talking, and my cousins were gossiping about their stupid magazines, I was just sitting there and feeling unconfertable about my humid pants! No one cared about me! I have had enough! I should have brought my book "stormbreaker"! So I called my best friend Alicia, she is the prettyest girl I have seen in my whole life!

I complained about my useless cousins and those dismal adults, She told me that I was too negative and she told me to look on the bright side. We talked and talk, finally I ask her if she could pick me up and she said yes. We go to Alex Rider's house, Alex was the cutest guy I've known in my whole life, I love to go to his house, he was always very nice to me, we were best friends since I'm third grade. We three talked a lot, and Alicia and Alex decide to take me to the movies, we've had so much fun together. No matter distance, time or family can't broke our friendship!
I'm a Chinese and the teacher told us to write a english diary, so I'm wondering can you plzzzzzzzzzzzz help me? use your way of writing my diary or check if is there any grammar , spelling , phrase that is wrong! I can give you 10 points if u did a good job! (you can change or add many dificult or funny words in my diary, make my diary more interesting) 10 POINTS!10 POINTS!

Answer 1

Dear Diary,
Today, we had a family reunion. Our grandmas, grandpas, cousins, uncles and aunts WERE all there.
We grathered in a very big restaurant, even though the restaurant iVERY big, the FOOD IS extremely awful.THE WAITERS AND WAITRESSES HAD BAD ATTITUDES AND EVEN WORSE, THEY SMOKE.

The world's most unfortunate things happended to me. I spilled the milk on my pants, and I called a waiter to get me some tissues, but the restaurant didn't have tissues! While the adults kept talking, and my cousins were gossiping about their stupid magazines, I was just sitting there and feeling UNCOMFORTABLE WITH my humid pants! No one cared about me! I THOUGHT TO MYSELF, 'I have had enough! I should have brought my book "stormbreaker"!' So I called my best friend Alicia, she is the prettyest girl I have seen in my whole life!

Additional Details

9 minutes ago
I complained TO ALICIA about my useless cousins and those dismal adults, She told me that I was too negative and she told me to look on the bright side. We talked and talkED, finally I askED her if she could pick me up. We WENT to Alex Rider's house. Alex IS the cutest guy I've known in my whole life. I love to go to his house, he IS always very nice to me. WE HAVE BEEN best friends since THE third grade. We three talked a lot, and THEN decideD to GO TO THE movies. We've had so much fun together. No matter distance OR time NO ONE CAN BREAK our friendship!

I'm Chinese and the teacher told us to write aN English diary, so I'm wondering can you plzzzzzzzzzzzz help me? use your way of writing my diary or check if is there any grammar , spelling , phrase that is wrong! I can give you 10 points if u did a good job! (you can change or add many dificult or funny words in my diary, make my diary more interesting)

VERY NICE USE OF ENGLISH, SWEETIE. KEEP IT UP!!

Answer 2

Dear Diary,
Today, we had a family reunion.My grandma, grandpa, cousins, uncles and aunts all were there..
We grathered in a very big restaurant.Even though the restaurant is so big, the food was extremely awful.Don't even mention those waiters and waitresses.They had a bad attitude & no desire to work at all,infact they were smoking during their duty hours. And I don't know why, but the world's most unfortunate things happen to me EVERY TIME.I spilled some milk on my pants, and I called a waiter to get me some tissues, but the restaurant didn't have any tissues! While the adults kept talking, and my cousins were gossiping about their stupid magazines, I was just sitting there and feeling uncomfortable about my humid pants! No one cared about me!That was enough.I regretted not having my book "stormbreaker" with me.So I called my best friend Alicia, she is the prettyest girl I have seen in my whole life!
I complained about my useless cousins and those dismal adults, She told me that I was too negative and also to look on the brighter side. We talked and talked, finally I asked her if she could pick me up and she said yes. We went to Alex Rider's house,.Alex is the cutest guy I've ever known in my whole life. I love visiting his house. He has always been very nice to me.We have been best friends since third grade. We three talked a lot, and they decided to take me to the movies.We had so much fun together . No distance ,family or friendship can break our strong friendship!

Answer 3

Your diary entry is fine as it is. Here are a few spelling corrections:
grathered - gathered
foods - food
happended - happened
unconfertable - uncomfortable
prettyest - prettiest
Punctuation suggestions:
period after waitresses, capitalize they, comma after smoke then lowercase "and," period after why, eliminate first "very time."
The rest seems fine.

Answer 4

Advice for you! Question aways comes first, then you type a small comment without putting a question at the end of it! You get better results!

Answer 5

Man you're long winded. I'm not going to read all that mess. Have you noticed people tend no ignore you when you speak.

Answer 6

that day must've sucked major dude, sorry to hear about that