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2006-08-28 22:08:16 · 12 answers · asked by Jaded 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
My everything
You took my breath away,
When I glanced into your eyes,
I had this little feeling,
That took me by surprise...
I feel this way inside,
Deep into my soul,
Something I can't hide,
Something I cant control...
When I saw you standing there,
I am looking at you smile,
I watch you coming closer,
My heart is going wild...
I don't know what to say,
Should I tell you how you how I feel,?
Or should I walk away...
Then all of the sudden,
Your right in front of me,
And I am hoping if I tell you,
You'll turn my dream to reality...
I know that we are just friends,
But there could be something more,
Because you are someone who I am in love with,
Someone who I adore...
Maybe I shouldnt tell you,
I don't want to ruin anything,
Because you are more then just a friend,
Your My everything...
2006-08-28 22:14:33 · answer #1 · answered by Mintjulip 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my love of all things new,hopefully pink but sometimes blue,
my love for everything that is you,my child of this modern world,
we hope and pray that all is well,when its not my eyes do swell.
this place is full of hope and wishes,not just cleaning and doing the dishes.
one day when you become taller,this big bad world will become smaller.
you are our future my little child,born free and very wild.
peace not war I hear you cry,to many people have to die,
we leave you now with this simple thought, who is to blame for all were taught.
(1st attempt)
2006-08-28 22:18:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-15 22:00:52 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I’m a proud person for what I’m about to say
my poem
why so many crimes?
why so many deaths?
why so many bad Influences ?
the only ones to blame are
Black people!
why so many wars ?
why so many none happy persons?
why are we here in life ?
God made all this!
what are we the people who say stop!
for all the crimes for all the religions!
lets just be people
2006-08-28 22:09:58 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Anybody could.
Writing a good poem is the problem.
2006-08-28 22:14:25 · answer #5 · answered by almintaka 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
everytime you walk pass me
how i wish you would just look at me
everytime you look at me
how i wish you would think of me
everytime you think of me
how i wish you would come and talk to me
everytime you talk to me
how i wish you would just tell me how u feel about me
no matter how, when and where
i just dont know why i'm always thinking about you
and i wish you would think about me too
no matter how, can i be with you?
no matter when, would you ask me to be yours?
no matter where, will you miss me?
i just wish you could be mine
i just wish you would tell me those 3 lovely words
i just wish you could just think of me every single day
i just wish you would just come to me and tell me ''I Love You''
i wonder if you really get my message
i wonder if you feel the same to me
i wonder if you would dare to tell me those 3 lovely words
i wonder if you dont really mind me
i wonder if you would be with me forever and eternity
2006-08-28 22:45:19 · answer #6 · answered by ‹‹тồкỹỌ‗ßõŸ›› 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Some people come here to **** and stink,and scratch there hairy balls!! Others come here to fart n stink and write upon these shithouse walls!!! For they paint these walls to hide my pen----- BUT THE SHITHOUSE POET HAS STRUCK AGAIN !!!
2006-08-28 22:20:30 · answer #7 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i could and i have many times before............ but i dont think its appropriate to let your deepest feelings go to a complete stranger :-)
2006-08-28 22:14:38 · answer #8 · answered by Bird 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really would, but it's five in the morning and i'm going to get killed if i don't go to sleep. sorry, maybe another time, Val :)
2006-08-28 22:12:11 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've no talent...but I could ramble about them all day *stoner habit*.
2006-08-28 22:10:49 · answer #10 · answered by Aleaha S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋