Hi its Me Again If You Remember.
I'm 16 And I Write Poems Sometimes And I Would Like To Know If There Is A Chance Of Me Being A Poet In The Future or An Artist. Read My Poem And Please Don't Judge I Just Love Girls Too Much.
Oh God Has To Be Genius Because He Made Such A Beautiful Thing On This Big World He Made Women. Oh Women, Oh They're Hair Smell, Its Like A Field Full Of Flowers. Oh They're Lips, When You Kiss Them Its Like Drinking A Water After Walking In A Desert For Ages. Oh God Is Genius, Because He Made Women With Such Nice Eyes, When They Look At You Its Like Whole World Is Yours. Oh Womens T*ts Specially When They Are Exited Is Seems Like They're Nipples Are Smiling To You And Then Oh Little Down Heavens Gates That Only One Can Pass, Only The One That Will Love Women For Real And For Ever. Oh God Is Genius Because He Made Heavens Gates And Put Two Guards So The Heavens Gates Would Be Protected Well. And After All This How Can We Can Not Say That God Is Genius.
2006-08-28 21:43:39 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
its good just keep it up........
2006-08-28 22:17:34 · answer #1 · answered by first time mommy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad just a hint thou. Sometimes there is such a thing as over complimenting
2006-08-28 21:47:44 · answer #2 · answered by angelic_devil30 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You got alot to learn, boy!
Advice for you! Question aways comes first, then you type a small comment without putting a question at the end of it! You get better results!
2006-08-28 21:46:21 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
keep practicing you have a good desire maybe get some creative writing advice from a teacher
you are young so your writing will mature as you do
2006-08-28 21:48:36 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
why u always post senseless poems
2006-08-28 21:45:25 · answer #5 · answered by yogesh 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2006-08-28 21:45:58 · answer #6 · answered by DrSH 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too many ohs but it's OK!
2006-08-28 21:46:19 · answer #7 · answered by Taste the rainbow 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too many "Oh.."...Sorry, it seems boring to me..
2006-08-28 21:53:29 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ignore them...its good, keep it up!!
2006-08-28 21:48:29 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋