About today,
I don't know what to say,
you ask this question,
about a poem of fiction.
Answers came in,
not very long has it been,
From all of the listed,
Not one is interested.
I thought of one thing,
It's better than nothing,
To your question, I reply,
"Everything you can apply."
"As long it rhymes,
and good in times,
about everything you say,
so do your poems everyday." :)
2006-08-28 14:49:55 · 17 answers · asked by Ace Striker 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
FYI, I'm just making it out of fun and it just pops out of my head....
and this poem is something to do about this yahoo answers... :)
2006-08-28 15:01:59 · update #1
I love it. Not many people would post a poem on here. It was kind of "brave" of you. And i love the topic of your poem. Its a little unusual.
nice one.
2006-08-28 14:57:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2006-08-28 14:54:11 · answer #2 · answered by Level 3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like it at all.
:(
Sorry, but it's not very good, and the grammar is pretty bad. It's not poetic license if it sounds forced, in my opinion. That and it insists upon itself as far as the rhymes go. I mean, you couldn't read it and not adopt some kind of cadence.
You need to take a moment and google Lewis Carroll's poetry. That man was a genius.
2006-08-28 14:52:41 · answer #3 · answered by greeneyedprincess 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, I kinda get it. But, I'm not big on figuring poems out. Since mine make no sense at all, and I made them that way, just as a flow of words that splur out and form something. But it's good. Congrats!
2006-08-28 14:56:13 · answer #4 · answered by Fangirl ♥♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's tight how you rhyme it so cool but it doesn't really make sense well it kinda does but dat's not a very good thing to write about cuz like u said no one is gonna be interested but u rhyme really tight...
2006-08-28 14:54:34 · answer #5 · answered by MGM 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poetry and I give you a 5 for for your poetic ability and your willingness to write and post your poetry. Your good but I just don't get this poem.
2006-08-28 14:52:39 · answer #6 · answered by ♥ Lips of Morphine ♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem is awesome your a good writter i'd give it a million on a scale of one to ten!!
2006-08-28 14:53:06 · answer #7 · answered by Via 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if it rhymes, it doesn't mean it's a poem. it has to have sense.
2006-08-28 20:42:16 · answer #8 · answered by yawmee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice one!
2006-08-28 14:51:27 · answer #9 · answered by let the speakers blow your mind 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very good, I liked it Alot!!â¥~â¥~â¥~â¥
2006-08-28 14:52:43 · answer #10 · answered by Shannon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋