(Poem from a friend):
ive been working really hard on it so honest answers defiently appreciated!!
one day i saw the sky
and i realized that i like rye
((((bread))))
i was listening to the tv
and i realized im the mayor of..... heartbreak city
(((((OOOOOOOOOOOOOOo yea yea ))))))))))))))
((chorus:))
roller coaster, roller coaster,
im realizing
im just a toaster,, just a toaster
busy frying...
2006-08-28 06:44:19 · 8 answers · asked by See ya later aligator 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i give you [B-]
not bad though...
2006-08-28 06:50:37 · answer #1 · answered by Jubei 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
honestly i have to say i love poetry and it really depends on your feelings at the moment. there is nothing to me as a bad or a good poem
2006-08-28 19:01:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol.. that was a question a while ago.. I called it "toaster dreams"
cute.. hehe
2006-08-28 14:02:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I honestly think you need to work on it a little more!
2006-08-28 13:49:32 · answer #4 · answered by Bowllynn 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't really understand it. maybe you could change it so that the public would understand it and not just you.
2006-08-28 13:53:13 · answer #5 · answered by um yea hi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what is this a poem or a song.
2006-08-28 13:49:48 · answer #6 · answered by katz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
do not mean to hurt your feelings but it was not good
2006-08-28 13:48:02 · answer #7 · answered by recmcmdc 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um..u should work hardER on this..coz it SUCKS
2006-08-28 13:52:26 · answer #8 · answered by still breathing 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋