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if you can make the most romantic poem, i'll defenitly give 10pts!!!

2006-08-28 05:21:00 · 12 answers · asked by BigBoy 2 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

wow you r all great!! (hey im confused here)

2006-08-28 05:59:30 · update #1

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She sits at her desk, a vision to clear any head
Like a miniature venus, alluring without moving
My eyes they drift over, almost scared to behold
For maybe my gaze would steal her beauty
But the lady remains, radiating like a star
The shine from her eyes could light the night sky
And her smile could, no, should change the world

Why can no other see what I see?
How can they not be impressed?
By someone so enticing?

Her voice is like liquid silk, flowing into my mind
A calmness spreads across me, as I weaken before her
I watch her perfect lips forming choice words
that to me never fail to allure, drawing me in
I long to kiss her, and hold her and touch her
I reach out and almost faint with desire
As tinglings spread around my body through my fingertips

How can this person exist?
And how had she escaped me before?
When I have been searching so long?

A freeze frame I yearn to hold this magical moment
This time in my life I can never risk losing
If I could hold her forever, then my life would have worth
The likes of which were only daydreams before
For the beauty that is she and the wonder that she is
Is like something only imagined but now come to life
And I know I will never be, feel or think the same again

What have I done to be given such a gift?
When was my luck changed?
And will it ever revert back?

My fingers are crossed and they will remain so for evermore.

2006-08-28 05:28:18 · answer #1 · answered by fletcheyc 2 · 0 0

Try this one - I call it 'Kismet' -

It was fate that we should meet, you and I,
Had I not looked, not stopped, but wandered by,
What would my life have been, had we two never met.
After thirty something years, I know not the answer yet.

When I look back, I see what’s coming still,
The past is blurred, the future come what will,
I know not where I’d been, but know only too well,
The moment when we met, and when I fell.

The confidence of youth, it made me bold,
At five foot eight, I felt six feet, or so I’m told.
The head of flaxen hair, that made me strong,
Has fallen now, I’m old and it’s all gone.

We’ve grown old together, you and I,
We’ve stayed as one for all those years, I wonder why.
You must have seen something in me that’s good,
I never knew what that thing was, maybe I should.

Our children are now older - than we were when we wed,
I remember that great day now - and all those sweet words said,
When that small flame, in life’s true game, was for the first time lit,
I now know why, I ne’er passed by, it was Kismet.


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2006-08-28 05:27:14 · answer #2 · answered by thomasrobinsonantonio 7 · 0 0

The best way to get back your ex is https://tr.im/sJqAp

Here's the hard part: Pretend she never existed, like it was all a dream, don't call her, that will make you the smaller person, be the bigger person since you deserve better, what she did to you on Valentines Day was immature, especially after dating for four years. This person wasted allot of your time and through it out the window. Go out tonight, even it it is only yourself, don't drink and call or feel sorry for yourself, this will only cause you embarrassment! I know your hurting..This will eventually will go away in time. Today is not a good day for you and your emotions are spinning all over the place.

Please, whatever you do, don't answer her calls and don't call her. If she keeps calling, which she pro bally won't, don't return her call for 5 days. Make her sweat and DO Not get back together right away if you discuss this in 5 days. Tell her since she Broke up with you, you have done allot of thinking, and had the taste of "being single again" and you would like more time being "friends" for now, so you are sure you are making the right decision. Remember "She decided she didn't want to be with you" so the door is open for you to get out and see what you have been missing for four years. You honestly need to do this for yourself.

She doesn't know, but what she did was give you the best valentines day present you will ever get! A new start and a new beginning, use it to your advantage. You will look back on this and Thank God this happened now instead of 4 more wasted years of YOUR life. Today does suck, stay Strong and I promise you your life is going to be so much more exciting and you are going to be happy. If you continue to call and call her, she will think of you as needy and won't want you. She is going to rethink what she did to you today and will be hurt, if you act like you could care less. Girls always want the ones they can't have. That is who you are now to her. Let her suffer,realizing what a mistake she made. This will drive her crazy. Right now she is on cloud 9 thinking you will take her back, OH, is she stupid!

Your life isn't ruined, hers is..She lost someone special, and gave you a gift to let to live life and find someone you deserve. You are not getting back at her, your teaching her what an idiot she is and what she lost and what you gained without her. SO when You eventually talk to her, tell her thank you for what she did...
She will be hurt and you will be happy!

2016-07-19 15:42:50 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0 0

The Moon is bright
Jasmines in your hair
Are white
How can I keep
my l ips tight
Without singing
An ode in this night
Oh Jasmina
You always hold me in awe
To drink your elixir of Beauty
I need straws
more than Hundred and Eighty

2006-08-28 05:46:22 · answer #4 · answered by ramba 2 · 0 0

Want to know how to get your ex back? Change yourself. Don't worry about changing other people, worry about changing yourself. Go to https://tr.im/djSqQ

Once you do that then you can start to worry about getting back together with your ex, other wise you will find that you are fighting about all the same things and getting no where. Do what it takes and I promise things will work out in your favor.

The funny thing is I came to the realization that I had to change a little too late. After I was kicked out and after I was about to lose the only things that truly mattered to me - her love. A funny thing happens when we truly love someone and lose them. We do what ever it takes to get them back. For me I had to drop bad habits that had caused not only our relationship to sour but practically every other relationship I had had in the past. Not only with women, but with friends, co-workers, family, you name it.

Which is why I say to you as my ex at the time said to me, the only thing you can do is change yourself. Work on yourself and improve on the person that you already are. Drop the negative things in your life that don't belong there and you will see all of your relationships start to take off to new heights.

2016-04-23 13:29:30 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0 0

Nice question, im not really good with poems, but i´ll give it a try. :)

Wonder-Pill -

I thought i´d never find a love
that made me feel this way
i still cant believe my luck
especially when you look at me that way
i love to hold you in my arms
and i love the almost-kisses you give me before you leave

Hold me forever, baby
and i wont care if the world fades
Hold me forever, baby
and maybe i wont die away

You fill this void inside me
this void, i thought i could never fill
as clique as it sounds
you´re my wonder-pill

Hold me forever, baby
and i wont care if the world fades
Hold me forever, baby
and maybe i wont die away


Hope you like it. :)

2006-08-28 05:30:53 · answer #6 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0 0

Love is a funny word - so I heard,
Creeps right up behind you, soft like a bird,
then buzzes around you and stings like a bee-
breaks my heart when you've gone -
Cupid - WHY PICK ON ME!!!!

2006-08-28 05:37:43 · answer #7 · answered by crafty ails 2 · 0 0

try writing your own for your girlfriend don't steal one on here
but here goes.
Me
One small person
With one Great word
every word is
one great feeling
for one small person
with one great word
That's an old one from my collection

2006-08-28 05:30:51 · answer #8 · answered by peter gunn 7 · 1 0

since we've been together
i've been thinking of you forever.

missing you like crazy,
i find myself being hazy.

finding you made me love you
and already adore you.

2006-08-28 05:29:30 · answer #9 · answered by cry 3 · 0 0

rose are red, violets are poems are boring and so r u.

2006-08-28 05:26:38 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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