I love writing poetry, because i have a talent to write, i am also a songwriter, so i suspect this says a lot about my writing poetry...Can anyone tap into their artistic, creative, poetry side and complete this taster with your own finishing...no jokers please, think deep to see what you come up with...who's up for the challange? here we go.
A leap of faith is all we need
A guiding light to help me see
The one who dries away my tears...continue
2006-08-28 04:04:38 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Ok, first you need to work on the TENSE of the poem.
The first line is cumulative first person,
the second line is first person singular
and the last line refers to a third person.
Just a minor rewrite, I know, but it may help you to find a final line.
A leap of faith is all I need;
a guiding light to help me see
to be with me and dry my tears
and whisper strength into my ears...
As faith unto myself is wrought
with others in my heart I've fought
the end brings forth a stronger me
the one I shun, but others see...
good luck, it's a great start to a wonderous self epic.
2006-08-28 04:09:51 · answer #1 · answered by Marvinator 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
A leap of faith is all we need
A guiding light to help me see
The one who dries away my tears
Will stick with me through the years
2006-08-28 05:02:08 · answer #2 · answered by gillamacs 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A leap of faith is all we need
A guiding light to help me see
The one who dries away my tears...
Will be my friend through all the years.
2006-08-28 04:13:18 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A leap of faith is all we need
A guiding light to help me see
The one who dries away my tears
2006-08-28 04:17:27 · answer #4 · answered by ed 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A leap of faith is all I need,
A guiding light to help me see
The one who wipes away my tears
And quiets all my midnight fears.
I need someone to lean upon,
To comfort me in daylight's dawn.
A leap of faith is all I need,
Someone to follow where I lead.
2006-08-28 11:17:33 · answer #5 · answered by rhymer 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
On my soul his image sears.
will be the answer to my fears. (meant in a way of saying that you are afraid of what it means to be in love, but are willing to try).
To me his love he now endears.
Deep into my soul he leers. (not my personal favorite, but you may like it, who knows)
Deep into my soul he peers. (again not my personal favorite, but is less "creepy-sounding" then the last one)
I will be faithful to for all my years.
2006-08-28 04:14:35 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm david from DRC
I'm a singer and i writ and sing my own songs
if you have anny problem about your talent am ready to help you
2006-08-28 04:13:13 · answer #7 · answered by honda v 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
stays to drink a couple of beers
2006-08-28 04:10:53 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I cannot write anything... be greatfull of your skill
2006-08-28 04:11:32 · answer #9 · answered by *Mustang* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i've fallen in love with ervinator
2006-08-28 05:31:31 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋