Sacral moment comes and goes… a delicate light quickly glows
A glimpse from the beyond
Inside I smell the fragrance of the soil and trees, colorful world around me
The atmosphere is worm I exist in the nothingness
I never seen such colorfulness place like this
Is this how reality is…?
It must be the place where I long to be
If it was only a moment, the eternity can hold more … it must be the joy we look for…
When there is no time… the infinite descends into the finite, how can the finite remain the same?
I’m drunk….
I’m becoming sane in the logic of the lord
I need to drop it I will dissolve
The supreme is waiting for me
Ageless, nameless this is a fact and to die in hell is to grow in heaven
Certainty and devotion…. I will run away with my faith
I am poor and you are wealthy
When it is a rainbow of colors - a mystery of colors and translucent light.
However, my eyes have become dull to see
I need you but you don’t need me
You know me but I don’t know you
I pray for you as I see you
I kneel to you almighty
Purify me hold me
Brace me
2006-08-28 00:52:32 · 7 answers · asked by haya D 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Thank you people for encouraging me:-)
In fact i did not expect it will be that good cuz english is not my mother language...
2006-08-28 01:14:50 · update #1
Thank you people for encouraging me:-)
In fact i did not expect it will be that good cuz english is not my mother language...
2006-08-28 01:16:06 · update #2
i hate to be critical but you spelled warm ... as worm... the atmosphere is worm?
and i will read it again...
i think you have a future and if you need a proofreader i would be interested
2006-08-28 01:59:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it very much
2006-08-28 08:50:31 · answer #2 · answered by shiranjhnsnwife 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Deeeeep....Its great that you wrote this one your own....congrats
(had to read it twice to understand what you were saying)
2006-08-28 08:01:05 · answer #3 · answered by johnavaro 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really good, a touch of philosophy and love and desire and sadness
2006-08-28 07:57:50 · answer #4 · answered by Ashley. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, good keep it up.
But where is your question as you put it here!
2006-08-28 08:03:46 · answer #5 · answered by Zia 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
such faith, you will never will be misguided. and its Superb, keep it up!!!
2006-08-28 08:07:06 · answer #6 · answered by Hardez 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's Ok.
2006-08-28 07:58:03 · answer #7 · answered by Issues of Mass Distruction ! 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋