Its all from me I wrote it myseif :
Every morning I resist to wake up
I don't wanna cut off the dream I made up
Facinging my reality is not my fun time
Everything I do to him is like a crime
Always missing my point n judging me
Thinkin he know better but he can't really see
I tryed to kill myself he tryed to vanish me too
Like I don't worth living so what should I do
So that why I don't wanna wake up
Reality make my heart parts break up
Tomorrow will be the same so I can't stay
I tryed to leave n just run away
But fear made wait another day
I tryed to keep the hope n figure a way
Cause the pain is gettin me to say
I had enough n I no longer can pay
Its not loud n clear cause I'm not wakin up
I don't want my dream n my heart break up
So do you think I can get a break
Something I really wanna feel
I don't mean another pain to heal
so hope you like it n enjoy it
2006-08-27 21:51:11 · 16 answers · asked by Janet 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Poetry is a very good tool for some to deal with high and low emotions....Some even put poetry to music which is a more popular form of emotional expression. (so dont let the negative revues hinder your creative moods) Keep it up kiddo. You have a knack...could use some editing, but its pretty good. Thanks for sharing. :)
2006-08-27 22:14:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
woooow honey u have a gift don't waste it, u just need 2 correct some words coz u have spellin' mistakes but everything else's just fine!
u really got me! coz sometimes i resist 2 wake up 2!!
but i have my days too ;)
2006-08-28 06:38:18 · answer #2 · answered by ღ♡♥SeNioriTa♡♥ღ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This site is supposed to be for real questions, not a place to air out your sucky poetry. How cheesy.
2006-08-28 05:05:39 · answer #3 · answered by BluntTruth 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I never heard pain after dreams ..
dreams do heal pain all the way ....
2006-08-28 04:59:13 · answer #4 · answered by ashokkw 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I don't know that much about poetry, but I enjoyed reading it =)
2006-08-28 04:56:22 · answer #5 · answered by MangoSlushie 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's very good
but try to check on ur English
that would make it better
2006-08-28 05:01:06 · answer #6 · answered by Rasha 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's great! Thumbs up!!
2006-08-28 04:59:58 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
title : How Could You Love Me Like This..?
well-done :)
2006-08-28 05:04:42 · answer #8 · answered by cascadingrainbows 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That was great, good job. I love readin poems :-P
2006-08-28 04:57:40 · answer #9 · answered by Game Guy 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you feel pain ?? go stand outside SGH A&E dept and see. then those r real pain. wake up,, wash up and u feel better .
2006-08-28 04:55:38 · answer #10 · answered by friday 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋