Dear Diary,
Tomorrow will be the first day of my junior high school, I'm so excited ! But I still miss my friends in my primary school, especially Alex Rider and Alicia Lohan. We have known each other since we were in the third grade, so it's really hard to let us say good bye.
I think I'm well prepared for tomorrow, I have got all the stationarys and some jotters that I needed. I just hate the idea of wearing uniform, I think uniforms are ugly! I just wish I was born in the United states, in the United States you don't have to wear those stupid , furry uniforms! I'm getting a bit nervous about tomorrow, cause there are a lot of people in the school that I don't know.
One thing that made me upset was that there are only ten or eleven people in my class. I wish there would be more people so the I can feel much less lonely, or I can say that there arn't much competitor in my class so it's pretty easy to get the first place.
2006-08-27 15:45:09 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Well, my dear Diary, wish my luck when I go to junior high school!
I'm a Chinese and the teacher told us to write a english diary, so I'm wondering can you plzzzzzzzzzzzz help me? use your way of writing my diary or check if is there any grammar , spelling , phrase that is wrong! I can give you 10 points if u did a good job!(you can change or add many dificult or funny words in my diary, make my diary more interesting)
2006-08-27 15:45:32 · update #1
make my diary longer and "more interesting"
2006-08-27 15:46:37 · update #2
Dear Diary,
Tomorrow will be the first day of attending junior high school. I'm so excited! But I still miss my friends in my primary school, especially Alex Rider and Alicia Lohan. We have known each other since we were in the third grade, so it's really hard to say goodbye.
I think I'm well prepared for tomorrow. I have got all the stationary and some jotters that I need. I just hate the idea of wearing uniforms. I think uniforms are preposterous! I just wish I was born in the United States. In the United States you don't have to wear those stupid, furry uniforms! I'm getting a bit nervous about tomorrow, because there are a lot of people in the school that I don't know.
One thing that made me upset was that there are only ten or eleven people in my class. I wish there were more classmates so that I could feel much less lonely. That, or I can say that there isn't much competition in my class so it's pretty easy to get first place.
There... I made a few changes, but you did a really good job.
2006-08-27 15:56:38 · answer #1 · answered by ILuvTheUsed&MCR 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You did an excellent job, Sydnie K polished up very nicely. But you don't say "I'm a Chinese" you say "I am Chinese." Just like I would say "I am Canadian."
Keep up the great work though, your English is terrific! Best of luck when school starts, I know you'll do very well!
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2006-08-27 16:10:18 · answer #2 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
...funny not furry.....that there isn't much competition..looks to me that you are doing really well with your english..hang in there...now I'm from Texas and I don't really know if my english is correct half the time...yours looks to be more correct than mine...
2006-08-27 15:57:34 · answer #3 · answered by lotusdell 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do your own homework.
2006-08-27 16:08:54 · answer #4 · answered by sweet_leaf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
go to bed kiddo
2006-08-27 16:06:39 · answer #5 · answered by Mopar Muscle Gal 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
silence.
2006-08-27 16:06:51 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is good, so far...
2006-08-27 16:11:30 · answer #7 · answered by thrag 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋