this is for a good cause can you help ?

Question

check out this website! i have been working on it all day and i am not satisfied with it.the structure was such hard work!.now i have little content.the site is based on me and my team walking around the world for world peace and charity.I was wondering if i could get some constructive help to make it more appealing as i am not content!

www.thuwish.com

thanks

wesley.
ps if i use code that you use for your myspace page can i use that on my website to decorate it ?

if not where can i find code?

how do i get people to look then if this is suspected as spam ?

Answer 1

i think this is a great thing you are doing. if i was not still in school i would seriously consider joining you. and if i was famous or rich or owned a major company i would sponsor you on this incredible journey! i look forward to looking at your pictures and hearing about the experience . on my computer there is a big blank Grey area on the right side so maybe you could put a border or something in that space i know if you search the web you can find codes. good luck!
i hope it all goes well

Answer 2

You should include a section on your web site that details what made you come to this reason on why you're walking around the world. You mention it on the home page but it's not very detailed. What kind of things that are happening upset you? Include some research and news articles. Your home page also includes a large picture of you, which takes away from the purpose of your mission. Your header is also very large.

I'm not sure where you can find a code. You'll have to ask someone who knows html better than I do.

Answer 3

1) Ditch the flash intro, its always really annoying unless very well done - I'm on dial up so skipped it. At least you gave us that option!
2) Shrink the photo, its too big.
3) Change from Arial Black to Arial. Its much more professional. Use the tag for your headlines instead of Arial Black.
4) Your font size is too big.
5) The banner is nice but takes up too much of the page.
6) The logo looks like it was slapped on the banner, place it to the left of the photo or something.
7) Theres too much enpty space on the left and it makes the page look unbalanced. Maybe move the links from the top where they get lost to a sidebar on the left?
Good luck with your walk!

Answer 4

Wesley, I like this, it is a cool site, You may want to downsize your picture to about Wallet Size, that way it doesn't take up most of the initial page, other then that, you keep fine tuning it, and you will prosper, I'm sure of it. Good Luck, and God Speed my friend...Look for sponsors from the web, that will sponsor you and your friends by letting them place decent ads on your site. Contact GreenPeace they may hook you up with what you need as far as resources, Most of all, in order to make things happen in life, Take all the constructive criticism and apply it to good use...... :-)

Answer 5

try centering your main page. reduce the photo size, use a .floatright on the picture so the text will situate to the left of the pic. then reduce the size of the text by a couple of points

Answer 6

I think you should punctuate and space correctly. You space 2 spaces after a period, once after a comma. Capitalize the first word in a sentence. Your spelling is decent.

Answer 7

Might want to choose a different picture. It was right in your face.

Answer 8

I would if I wasn't scared of a virus.

Answer 9

spam spam spam

Answer 10

i would help but i aint got no TIME