from 1-5 how good is this poem. i made this poem in the 5th grade?

Question

life is long , as long as life, the man who never had a wife. it was his dream, and so it seems, the "bickest house", he'd ever seen. a beautiful, beautiful,beautiful soul, she's the blame, his heart she stole... for so afraid to speak in crowds, yet his feelings speak out very loud. he wears his troubles on his sleeves, for child so young he cannot breath. romantic man as he to be, who likes to fight and fish in sea, and loves to live life, that was the story of, a man who had no wife

thanx 4 ur comments! ( i wrote it one day in afterschool )

Answer 1

interesting. i wish you could have shown some form on here that way i could get a better feel for rythm but it was pretty good.....4 stars!

Answer 2

3

Answer 3

Seems pretty good for a 5th grade level poem. I'll give it a 3 1/2

Answer 4

you have have been given large ability. yet u cud carry somewhat extra existence into ur poems. you have carried out little to play with the sentiments of the reader (that's the objective of the poet) coz the ending became genuine unexpected. nonetheless, it merits a 4/5. carry on!! (:D)

Answer 5

Three

Answer 6

...and it does sound as if you wrote it in 5th grade.

2 out of 5.

Answer 7

0/5 i could write better than that when i was in 5th way better!

Answer 8

it was strange. i'll give it 3 1/2

Answer 9

definatly a five and i dont even like poems.

Answer 10

Good .Carry on.