pull the skin off and see the blood and vessels errupt
errupt shut the f*ck up about me you don't know me
let me be,let me see,my bones let be alone
my bones these bones are so cold
hold me down let me drown end it all now
i'm found ,yet down
so careful what your telling me
what i feel these wounds can't heal
peel away the layers stake me with a dagger
well why did you let me cry?
while your suffocating me let me be I can't see
you don't even know the real me
oh I can't f*cking feel
peel away away,away f*cking away
never let me see the day
oh well I'm gonna cry the day away
laying down touch touch the ground
as i frowned i don't even feel proud
hear me out as i shout out loud
careful what your telling me
from the insides you can figyre it out
but I can't even hear it lingering about and around
^what you think
2006-08-27 06:59:00 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Beauty & Style ➔ Other - Beauty & Style
You have issues!!
2006-08-27 07:03:43 · answer #1 · answered by happyslappy 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i thought it was great!! since poems can consists of words, thoughts, anything really, etc... this was a could combination.
as i was reading it, i thought you were discribing someone being killed and expressing those moments or someone dying of a disease that has gone from the begin to the end...
a little scary theme, but very creative.
2006-08-27 07:11:35 · answer #2 · answered by charwants2know 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In my humble opinion... you need some serious help.
If you've got all those feelings inside, you need to see a counselor, or psychiatrist. If you keep it all inside, you could end up hurting yourself or someone else.
Seek help... please.
-Jordan
2006-08-27 07:03:39 · answer #3 · answered by tayljo09 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That describes exactly how I feel somedays. Your poem is great.
2006-08-27 07:05:44 · answer #4 · answered by GrayFarie♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow very lovely and interesting... very nice indeed good work i think the thing you wrote is all right it is totally on a right topic well i think there is no mistake or incorrect word....
nice wording tooo
good poem ..........!!!!
2006-08-27 07:07:04 · answer #5 · answered by Pearl Girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
personally, its depressing to read. and nasty words. it sounds as if u are in a world of your own and wanting to dom something.
2006-08-27 07:07:34 · answer #6 · answered by lisa h 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
whoa! this made me get goose bumps wow that was an awesome poem!
2006-08-27 07:02:58 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Gd .......yet slightly disturbing
2006-08-27 07:02:40 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it`s really good, it could be an evanesence song.
2006-08-27 07:17:30 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
deep, real deep
2006-08-27 07:01:38 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋