The Dancer
13 long years
After my break up with my Ex-girlfriend.
I thought we were going to be together forever
looking and searching.
There were a few girls but they all had the same comon thing.
A boyfriend
Some were speical
Some don't know what the hell they were doing.
13 long lonely years.
Then one day, I found this place.
Lots of beautiful girls
A special dancer caught my eye
Long beautiful brown hair flowing like a high water fall
Bronze shiny skin
Beautiful puffy lips
She takes a special intrest in me
She cries on my shoulder
I want to take care of her
I adore her
She makes me happy again
She could be the one.
2006-08-27 02:21:32 · 4 answers · asked by l2wh 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
sweet
2006-08-27 03:05:01 · answer #1 · answered by jeanjean 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No offense, but I really didn't care for it. Keep trying?
2006-08-27 04:13:55 · answer #2 · answered by Smiles Like She Means It 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is just prose-and not very good prose, at that-masquerading as poetry.
2006-08-27 03:35:47 · answer #3 · answered by rhymer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am not sure. Something is missing. Good luck!
2006-08-27 02:32:54 · answer #4 · answered by nanrai18 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋