I attended a music event and it was very good. I have two paragraphs done but I need two more. I described the event and I want to describe my feelings in paragraph 4, but I don't know what to do for 3. Do you have any suggestions??
2006-08-26 10:46:41 · 2 answers · asked by Rahwa 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Just a little pointer. The best format for any paper is the 1st para is the introduction, the next paragraph(s) are the body what you want to talk about, and the last paragraph is the conclusion.
You could write a paragraph about the style of music, the musicianship, were they professional or laid back, was the sound crisp or sloppy, were they following the conductor, were they dressed professionally or casual, what kind of message did their appearance convey?
2006-08-26 11:00:04 · answer #1 · answered by grrlgenius5173 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
who was there, who atteneded or write more about your feelings and what could have been better
2006-08-26 10:49:27 · answer #2 · answered by Alesig 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋