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I see the way you stare at me.
I can see right through you.
I see the way you hate me
because I break the "rules."

I lay down with man
While you lay down with woman.

I see the way you make fun of me.
I can see you laugh.
I see the way you hate me
Because I'm gay.

You hate me, because I'm not like you.
You hate me, because I'm different.

I may be different, but it doesn't make me love any different.
I put one shoe on at a time, just like you.

I see the way you stare at me.
I can see right through you.
I see the way you love me
God, how come they can't be just like you?

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Closet

Masks do we weave
Walls does society build
Worlds created that we can not leave
Can one break free even if willed?

A life condemned lies
Forced to die
Hidden, and estranged,
from society by far
Not living who you are

Looking out on the world
The future that can never be
As you ride the worlds sea
The community's hatred unfurled

Everyone should be free
Why,
Oh why am I not free to be me?

2006-08-26 05:56:28 · 15 answers · asked by brian_chris 1 in Society & Culture Cultures & Groups Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender

15 answers

This work reveals a lot of issues the the writer is attempting to address. The literary level of this piece is unremarkable. The emotions described indicate that perhaps the writer need to have some counseling.

2006-08-26 06:05:45 · answer #1 · answered by david42 5 · 0 1

Wow I know exactly where you're coming from......... I can relate so well. I mean in a place like country *** GA where everything is judged. From interracial dating to same sex couples.... It makes it so hard to come out or to be different in a society or in my case where everything seems to be uniform. Its so annoying! But I agree why can't everyone be like God? I mean after all we were made in his image. I dunno but GREAT POEMS.

2006-08-26 06:12:07 · answer #2 · answered by Leelee 2 · 0 0

Oh, who wrote these, these are pretty! I have one I wrote, called "My Abomination" It's really good, so I've been told. Email me if you want to read it. I was really mad when I wrote it because somebody at my job had spit in my face that morning.

2006-08-26 06:00:10 · answer #3 · answered by Agent Double EL 5 · 1 0

All i can say is thank u for posting these beautiful poems that speak the truth.

2006-08-26 09:16:40 · answer #4 · answered by DanceDiva 2 · 0 0

i really like that poem it takes people like you to make the world better for lgbt community.your really good man make more keep it up!

2006-08-26 08:18:31 · answer #5 · answered by mickel680 1 · 0 0

Talent, sheer talent

2006-08-26 06:01:52 · answer #6 · answered by Mooks 3 · 1 0

It is wonderful! I love it! You've got great talent.

2006-08-26 11:43:15 · answer #7 · answered by Necole 3 · 0 0

beautiful i really like closet, good job if you wrote it.

2006-08-27 08:13:58 · answer #8 · answered by darkest_saiyan_2 2 · 0 0

I like eggs.

2006-08-26 08:18:58 · answer #9 · answered by dannyk.8 3 · 0 0

sweet

2006-08-26 10:56:34 · answer #10 · answered by kittens 5 · 0 0

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