Life across your stare gleams bright
And glistens off my soul, a mirror for your light:
In your eyes, calm and warm, all pride waxes humble
And into your arms I’d wilt and crumble,
As into a soothing hand at rest upon my cheek.
Like a thorn my heart has grown into your soft, soft air,
Where for all the world, vanishes all care:
Where with your touch, away fades the bleak;
I am with you at peace, a lover on my knees,
Who woos with silly rhymes so your heart that I might please.
But ‘til we’re heart to heart, and your lips again I kiss;
Eternity shall pass I fear; but what sweet bliss,
To live a life and dream until at death the dream departs -
A simple dream, to know and love your gentle heart.
2006-08-25 16:57:48 · 13 answers · asked by rlw 3 in Social Science ➔ Gender Studies
awww...did u write this? its really good!
2006-08-25 16:59:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful words that tug
At the strings of my embittered heart
Soothing music to my ear
Sweet nothings I couldn't bear
To calm the beast in you
My loins long for your smoldering touch
Eagerly awaiting for us to meet
In some hidden hideaway
Nirvana you name it ,as I recall
Even for a day, satisfaction is mine.
Your love slave bid your every wish.
Memories to cherish, mine to keep.
Till then, my heart eagerly awaits
With patience and not a moment too soon.
Not as good as yours.
Thought I'd die,
Found myself in Heaven
Please write more poetry
So my heart can swoon.
2006-08-26 01:24:52 · answer #2 · answered by rosieC 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet dear Prince, Sweet music to our ears.
Sending the words of your heart to ours.
Thank you for the lovely poem.
I hope to find someone like you only my age.
2006-08-26 00:30:31 · answer #3 · answered by Here I Am 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My hubby needs to drop the remote control & pick up a pen...sob...sniffle...
2006-08-26 00:05:09 · answer #4 · answered by Ivyvine 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW , love ur writing, if is really is ur writing xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
2006-08-28 12:07:40 · answer #5 · answered by mateli6 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I puked a bit in my mouth.
2006-08-26 00:00:16 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Will you marry me?
2006-08-26 00:00:17 · answer #7 · answered by mamabird 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
She will say yes even if you did'nt write it..
2006-08-26 00:03:14 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awww!!! Did you write that??? That is fire!
Will you...ya know...marry me?
2006-08-26 00:07:02 · answer #9 · answered by ♥M.a.s.q.u.e.r.a.d.e.™ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW.........Will you marry me and write me poetry like this for eternity???????? LOL
2006-08-26 00:03:21 · answer #10 · answered by mizzzzthang 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, I really like this one the best. (^.^)
2006-08-26 05:44:02 · answer #11 · answered by sakura4eternity 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋