Hi, I am an event coordinator.I have been working in this profession for over 10 years. I have just opened my own event management buisness here in Ireland. I am currently having a proffesional webpage built for me at my own domain with before and after pictures as well as web streaming. Until then however I needed a webpage that people can search for my companies details. I have built two of these pages. The newest one I have built is http://amazingevents.wetpaint.com
the latter was
http:// www.freewebs.com/amazingeventspr
I would really apprecriate it if you can take the time to look at the webpages and let me know what you think. Which one I should use until my new one is up and running. As well as any comments you have. If your comments help me to improve my site then they are worth their weight in gold thank you .
2006-08-25 16:34:27 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Local Businesses ➔ Ireland ➔ Other - Ireland
the other webpage is http://www.freewebs.com/amazingeventspr
it has a pr after it the amazing events site on their is not worth going to and does not belong to e thank you
2006-08-25 16:35:55 · update #1
IMHO, the colors in your earlier page are better, as well as your tab links, and upon further review, entirely better than "professiona"l,
other than adding before and after pictures as well as web-streaming.
2006-08-25 17:39:16 · answer #1 · answered by jit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A little wordy, needs some spacing out and if site allows some photos/graphics.
Maybe a slightly duller colour, I love red but ten mins on your page n i'll end up with a migrane
2006-08-25 23:44:45 · answer #2 · answered by Muppet_Planet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great, but i do have to say u wrote too much on one page. Too keep someone interested you should split it into a couple different pages with links to them at the top.
2006-08-26 00:03:31 · answer #3 · answered by Dylan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Paragraphs!
Your page right now is a big block of text, and nobody likes to read big blocks of text. Stick in lots of whitespace - paragraphs, images, anything to break up the text.
Oh, and don't centre-align the text either; it makes it much harder to read.
2006-08-26 00:06:36 · answer #4 · answered by Chasiufan 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, to be honest... it is very busy.
The words are not alligned properly.
But the content and message is good.
You just need to clean it up a bit.
Good luck!
2006-08-25 23:43:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I just changed some stuff. I spell checked it etc. Looks good to me.
2006-08-25 23:42:34 · answer #6 · answered by onedot.darling 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋