poems from the heart are special, and sometimes you can read something that just touches you..... my girls were expressing their feelings, writing things they couldnt talk about, they found it a great help..................poem is in my prevoius question..........
2006-08-25 10:24:31 · 14 answers · asked by donua1022 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
riiiiggghhhht...
Have fun with life!
2006-08-25 10:26:11 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think I may be just that person.
It made me cry because of the feelings aned emotion behind it.
I am not sure if it is actually a poem, maybe a piece of prose, but that is not meant as a criticism, just a suggestion.
Have you read "Carrying the Elephant" by Michael Rosed? He wrote some poems and prose related to the death of his son, He also did a video, I think which was to help family members come to terms with a death in the family. - I can't remember what this was called.
My son, died, aged 20; 4 years ago, of Meningitis and I am still grieving. I have written one short poem, but found it really difficult to write anything so 'open' as what your daughters have written.
I miss my son, so much, even though we rowed a lot when he was around - he was a difficult teenager. Yes, I miss his smile and I would give anything just to talk to him again and to tell him how I feel.
Well, I won't ramble on too much ... but thanks for your question, and God Bless you and your family:>)
2006-08-25 17:46:38 · answer #2 · answered by jayteaches 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's very nice although a bit long for a poem.
a poem has to be short and strong, to the point
if it can't grab you by the throat in a few lines it won't grab you at all.
i'll leave you with one of my one poems that says about the same thing in 5 lines
there will be no more day
no more light
no more air to breathe
since there is
no more you
hope you like it
2006-08-25 17:40:35 · answer #3 · answered by peter gunn 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hello my dear, I really enjoy, i just read your poem and I really enjoyed it. It is creative, in depth, it carries with it a bag of emotion and believe me, it leaves me breathless. Your poem is in a class by itself and believe you will never be challenged for years to come. You will die holding this record.
Finally, reading your poem has revealed to me why I could never pass poetry in school
2006-08-25 18:04:06 · answer #4 · answered by sexonsight 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry but I'm a bit confused! Is that your poem you wanted to share?
2006-08-25 17:29:51 · answer #5 · answered by floss 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
O.K. I think i get it... it made me think. Do you want to hear mine?
Well here goes anyway:
I'm falling and crawling, losing my footing again.
I'm tumbling and stumbling, collapsing down again.
I'm tripping and sinking,crumbling away again.
I hope you didn't think it was rubbish, thanks for the poem, xXx
2006-08-25 17:36:35 · answer #6 · answered by roooof 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful. from the heart. Can really relate to it.
Must remember it
2006-08-25 17:36:57 · answer #7 · answered by finnykid 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
No-one was ever yet a great poet,without being at the same time a profound philosopher...........
2006-08-25 17:31:02 · answer #8 · answered by a cottage by the sea 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You been on the vino again, me dear.
2006-08-25 17:30:20 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
fine words
2006-08-25 17:33:03 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ugh! poetry, the art of a lazy person.
2006-08-25 17:30:52 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋