its not done yet...plz tell me wat i can do 2 make it better and wat you think of it
(v1)
i dont know wats happning nothing feels the same
feels like im an new player in some sick game
when the suns rising for some its still night
the voices i hear say dont give up this fight
(chorus) (change in pace ...slows down...music softens)
i need someone to reach out and give me their hand
to pull me out of this nightmare and on to solid land
i need someone to get me out of here
out of this goblet of fear
(p.s....im not goth or emo or nething like that)
2006-08-24 18:48:02 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
its good...it could use some work on the courous but besides that its not bad
2006-08-24 18:55:11 · answer #1 · answered by Stubs 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its good. I write songs too...i like to sing... i just really like a strong chorus...
2006-08-25 01:58:30 · answer #2 · answered by Marie 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really like it but careful...don't make it so emo...have a happy ending
2006-08-25 01:58:47 · answer #3 · answered by simpleplan0013 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats pretty cool i guess... it sure does make you sound emo or goth, though... lol
2006-08-25 01:51:38 · answer #4 · answered by SlipKnoT MaGGoT 666 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats good can you please send me the rest of the lyrics when your done and i want to listen to you sing it ok so email me thanks
2006-08-25 01:57:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
very nice...
2006-08-25 01:58:01 · answer #6 · answered by Jubei 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋