what do you think about this song?

Question

can someone give me some feedback on this song. its my latest "imma prophecy" personally i dont think the lyrics work well with the beat but it doenst sound bad can i get your honest opinion about it please? feel free to check out the other songs


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Answer 1

It's alright but I think you should speak up a little bit more when you were raping I couldn't really here somethings you were saying. Try to put some more metaphors, rap with more energy the lyrics are good but the words feel empty like if there's no emotion behind them remember that 2pac sometimes used to record while he was high you know what I mean? Get a better mic when you can and or find a place with less noise if you haven't already. Re-do some parts until its perfectly synchronized with the beat, also really think on the way you should tone your voice try to find a tone for your voice that no one else has ever used but don't make it annoying like Mike Jones lol. One last thing, what other people think about your music is important but what you think of your music is to. There's no point in making music that other people if you don't think like it yourself so try to listen to your music and find things that are wrong with it yourself to.

Answer 2

i like da song. i agree wit u i dont think the lyrics work well with the beat

Answer 3

It's ok

Answer 4

it's good

Answer 5

its pretty good

Answer 6

Its pretty good. Thanks for asking and providing info.

Answer 7

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