This is another poem that i wrote , more sensitive than the last and without doubt , a masterpiece !
There were these Burberry boys
Hanging outside the local shop
Acting hard and pulling a strop
Well what could i do , i had to make 'em stop.
I turned around and started to run
Went to my house , looked for a gun
Well i 'aint bad ,but i 'aint a nun
I'm being for real , it 'aint a pun
Ran super fast out the house
Very quite, just like a mouse
Like a Ninja I was ready to pounce
Killed all of 'em and i won't renounce.
I do hope you enjoyed that one , I know the Vicar enjoyed it as we enjoyed our summer holiday in the south of France. Ah..French wine , the open air .......a true gift for poets everywhere.
2006-08-24 13:12:29 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Simply Chav-tastic!
2006-08-24 17:42:05 · answer #1 · answered by Pretty Tough Girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Definite potential, just needs tweaking. Would burberry boys use words like strop? Why say you're not a nun, when you sound like a man anyway? Super fast sounds a bit camp. Perhaps the vicar is a bad influence on you- try spending some time talking to junkies.
2006-08-24 21:28:43 · answer #2 · answered by Oracle Of Delphi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
complete nonsence, vey good keep it up but next time try a hloiday in manchester. I think you and your gun would be very busy lol
2006-08-24 13:15:42 · answer #3 · answered by littlebrother1961 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need help in more ways than one.
2006-08-24 13:20:07 · answer #4 · answered by hedgehog 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your poem.
2006-08-24 19:45:56 · answer #5 · answered by Lady Penelope 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋