Please read my report for English?

Question

I supposed write about "What happened this summer". Here my report. Can you tell me if you think it good?


One day I was with Lil-T and we was just chillin. Then some punk-*** friend of Lil-T brother all come over and be like give them Nintendo sticks I is playin the game now fool. We was all like no way bxxxh you gonna have to kill us for them. Then he all pull out a gun and be sayin he gonna shoot us for them sticks. We was all crapping are pants but then my brother come in and he like what up with the mad gangsterish clowin. Then he all whoop his friend. My bro stood up fo me and he my best friend now.

Answer 1

One day I was with Lil-T, and we were just chilling. Then some punk-creep friend of Lil-T"s brother came over. We wanted my Nintendo sticks. I told him I am playing the game now fool. He said, “ like no way bxxxh you gonna have to kill us for them.” Then he pull out a gun and said he was , “ gonna shoot” us for them sticks. We were all crapping our pants. Then my brother come in and said, “ like what up with the mad gangsters clowin.” Then he whooped his friend. My brother stood up for me.

Answer 2

If this is a serious report for English, it's absolutely terrible. You have run ons all over the place. You don't use quotations for the dialogue, no commas after transition words, and subject/verb agreement is painful to read.

This is an 'F' all the way.

Answer 3

There's only one thing I like about it, and that's the complete ignorance, and the disregard for ANYTHING of intellect. Other than that, you are, and will forever be a FAILURE as a student, and as a human being! Good luck in jail!!

Answer 4

Your joking here. You going to give this to your teacher as a summer report? It pure rubbish such bad grammar.

Answer 5

Id giv it a b+. that got mad heart yo.