How can I improve on my song?

Question

it's called "Next Best Haven"
Here's my myspace: www.myspace.com/jlsolos

Answer 1

u can singing better

Answer 2

sorry to say dude but work on your singing.
Your voice doesn't sound quite that bad but you lack a little empathy there's just no feeling. Try listening to people like John Lee Hooker and Johnny Cash. If you can get what they are saying to you you are one third of the way, then try to put yourself in their shoes feel what they feel. then try to do that yourself.
Secondly learn to control your voice, learn to sing with your gut. to do that tighten your abs breathe in through your nose and push the air out through the pressure in your gut and your midriff. try singing that way you'll be able to go much deeper and louder and not sing so high pitched that really stresses your voice. As you can gather from the picture i'm indeed a singer!!

Answer 3

its sounds ok but first i could not hear ur voice i like standing there

Answer 4

I like what I heard but.....the vocals are low..I dont know what mixer youa re using but you need your vocals up.........
what I heard sounded like good lyrics. :)