two peas in a pod
one is fine
one is odd
one is green
one is brown
one wears a smile
one wears a frown
one is skinny
one is fat
one is funny
the other is a ****
one wears flip flips
one wears shoes
one drinks vodka
the other drinks booze
one drives a car
the other a van
one is a woman
and the other is a man!
2006-08-24 04:42:06 · 39 answers · asked by ? 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
c'mon its funny and clever and i made it up all on my own!
by the way im 18
2006-08-24 04:52:02 · update #1
WOW IM 18 TOO!!!!!!!! OH MAN THERE'S ONLY A FEW OF 18 YEAR OLDS IN THE WORLD!!!!! WOW!!!!
2006-08-25 15:06:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
to be frankly honest it's just a rhyme not really poetic.
But I started out that way to. Just remember poems don't necissarily need to rhyme. And keep at it
i'll leave you with a short poem of mine
there will be no more day
no more light
no more air to breathe
since there is
no more you
2006-08-24 04:47:14 · answer #2 · answered by peter gunn 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was f*cking funny, quite ironic too since 2 peas in a pod are supposed to be identical yet they are totally different.
2006-08-24 04:50:37 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE IT! its so unique and hilarious! if only other guys could write poems like that also. i think its a really good poem!! u are very creative with ur writing. keep it up and maybe I will see ur name on the "FAMOUS POETS" list.
2006-08-24 04:45:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Rudyard Kipling - eat your heart out
2006-08-24 05:05:55 · answer #5 · answered by Useless 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's pure genius! seriously, if u ever decide to publish a book of poetry, i'd be the first in line.
2006-08-24 04:48:24 · answer #6 · answered by lady sixx 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, Good Morning..
I enjoyed it! It made me giggle in my office....You have a skill man!!! Keep it up...Byebye...
2006-08-24 04:59:27 · answer #7 · answered by Cloe 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's okay. that is a massive compliment from me, by the way, because i HATE poetry.
except limericks.
2006-08-24 05:16:59 · answer #8 · answered by StaceyMayBrown 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ooooohh thattss soooo sweeeettt!!! good job!!!
2006-08-24 04:48:44 · answer #9 · answered by SugaPie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well it's not quite good enough for the bathroom wall but keep trying.
2006-08-24 04:47:55 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋