whatcha think of my song???????????
In doubt
sometimes I feel
like My life’s a wonder
And sometimes I feel
Like I’m ten feet under
(bridge)
Right now I feel confused, depressed and hurt
Like what is this worth?
(chorus)
When you broke my heart
What was that about
Trying to be myself
And now my heart’s in doubt, yeah, yeah
When I walk out the door in the morning-time
I think about how you broke my heart
Right down the middle, in half
I knew it was done from the start
(sings softly to guitar)i can do anything without u bay bay (x2)
(repeat bridge)
(repeat chorus x2)
thats it i hope ya like it!!!!!
its about me and a friend
i think he likes this girl that HATES me!
i introduced them too!
now theyre best friends!
.sad.
2006-08-23 16:25:55 · 12 answers · asked by ♥ HeartStolen ♥ 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
u can always tell me parker.
2006-08-23 16:30:20 · update #1
yah its copyrighted
2006-08-23 16:38:32 · update #2
did u right that? if you did i love it IT COULD WIN A OSCAR ,EMMY ,TEEN CHOICE AWARD ..LOL just a great song loved and and im pretty sure every1 else did!!
2006-08-23 16:32:11 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I personally love it--I can relate to this situation...not exactly the same but a very similar situation. Anyway I love the first verse....the my life's a wonder...fee like i'm ten feet under.
Anyway--great job on the song, and I really hope that things work out =D
2006-08-23 23:31:11 · answer #2 · answered by Josh 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good song writing and now put some cool music to it and get it copywrited.
2006-08-23 23:37:52 · answer #3 · answered by toughguy2 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i luv it, it kinda describes how i feel right now, i just found out yesterday that my guy friend (also my crush for almost a year now) likes my other friend, and if i understood her right. she likes him bak, and a chat i had with him is making me wonder if he likes me, and i've probably said too much, but idc cuz i need to tell someone
2006-08-23 23:29:28 · answer #4 · answered by xBuriedxAxLiex 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really awesome song, lol Rihanna should sing this one! seriously i love it! i write songs like this one too, thye come out gr8, again goood job =D
2006-08-23 23:35:45 · answer #5 · answered by [♥moi♥] 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I Like It ...Very Nice..Good Job Hun..
2006-08-23 23:32:02 · answer #6 · answered by ❀Mother Of 2❀ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mediocre lyrics, honestly.
2006-08-23 23:28:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i also think they are pretty same old same old. we have heard it all before and it is very short.... there better be a really long guitar solo or something.
2006-08-23 23:33:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good song. i like it writing songs is a good way to express yourself, u did a good job :)
2006-08-23 23:33:13 · answer #9 · answered by T♥R♥U 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice song
2006-08-23 23:27:32 · answer #10 · answered by Nick 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋