Help with my resume?

Question

Objective:
Obtain a position that will assist in refining management skill while continuing to further personal knowledge and goals.

Skills and Qualifications:
Strong Organization Skills, Self-Motivated, Strong Communication Skills, and Excellent Computer Skills

Work Experience:

November 2005-PresentAdvanced Planning Office Specialist I
BAE Systems, Norfolk, VA

•Develops plans and monitors performance against cost and schedule goals for the DDG ship program.
•Identifies and analyzes variances from program performance goals, develops reports depicting relevant information.
•Interfaces with all functions at all levels in creation and maintenance of schedule data including activity status gathering in status meetings.
•Utilizes automated planning systems to prepare and update a comprehensive schedule which reflects the appropriate time phased completion of tasks and the application of required resources.


May 2004-November 2005In-Home Daycare Provider
Norfolk, VA

•Develop and coordinate plans and schedules for educational requirements for pre-school age youth.
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August 1999-May 2004Fire Controlman Third Class
US Navy, Norfolk, VA

•Developed and managed a budget for repair supply parts and consumable goods.
•Coordinated ordering, shipping and receiving of repair supply parts and consumable goods.
•Identified, analyzed, and corrected various problems on the Close-In Weapons Systems (CIWS), NATO SeaSparrow, and TAS operating systems.
•Maintained supervision of personnel during routine and emergency maintenance procedures.
•Planned, coordinated and executed divisional and command level parties to enhance morale.
•Completed numerous courses to enhance and enrich my personal and professional activities.

Education:

April 2006A.A. in Business Administration
American Intercontinental University, Hoffman Estates, IL

I need more stuff for my in home daycare time period.

I have my name and everything at the top and references available upon request at the bottom, but I didn't want my name and everything out there for everyone in the world to see.

Answer 1

A resume should be only one page. Employers glance through resumes--don't overwhelm them--keep it clear and concise. For example, you can easily leave out 'Completed numerous courses...'

Be sure to include a section for References Available on request. You can list these on a separate sheet; if asked for this, you will have it handy.

You Objective statement should tell the potential employer what you are offering to bring into that organization, not just what you expect to get from it.

Be sure to put your name at the top in bold, all caps, say, 14 point font. Then in 12 font under this , your address, phone #, and e-mail address. To make this stand out, consider a double line (Format, Borders and Shading, Borders tab. Choose the double line, thick & dark with a thin line under it).

Answer 2

not really. you have summed up what you did just fine. when i receive a resume. i dint need a novel in each job category, just a basic overview.
your other jobs have an impressive list. a resume should only be an addition to the job application, and you can go into greater detail at an interview.

Answer 3

Objective is kinda vague and u can check out some sample resume in my profile and update urs for free :) all the best :)

Answer 4

your objective is too vague. you should not be asking for a position that will 'help you' with anything. makes it sound like you need training. the employer wants someone who is good to go. you want something is descrining what you are looking for.

am going to provide you with a couple of good web sites that i use in my profession.

Answer 5

make ur objective little shorter. . avoid writing self-appraising statements like excellent in....bla bla.

God Speed