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i what to write to my loving one so i what u to tell me what to write for me to say my feel to her.

2006-08-22 23:42:07 · 5 answers · asked by BAFFO 1 in Arts & Humanities Theater & Acting

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My Dearest One,
If all the time in eternity were to be compressed into a single moment, I would want to spend that moment with you. You are more beautiful to me than words can express. I have no gift that can show you how much I care other than my heart. Please take it and let me love you forever.

2006-08-22 23:53:06 · answer #1 · answered by Isis 7 · 0 0

First, consider what you want to write.
Do you want to write a poem or a prose?

What is the general subject you want to write on?
Then think about what lines you want to have. You can consider things like about your feelings, stuff about her or try to recall some special stuff that only you guys know between the both of you. Its kinda like getting inspiration to get the ideas moving. Anything goes.

Draft down the lines. Write down anything that comes to mind.
Review them against what you intended to write in the first place. Pick out those you feel will fit in nicely together and set aside the rest. Don't discard anything at this point, you might find use for them as you go along.

If you're writing a poem, try to reorder the lines to get some kind of flow.
Try to think of alternative ways to rephrase the sentences to make them sound better.
Be creative. Don't be inhibited even if you feel you may not be clever with wordplay.

Read what you have over and over to yourself and assess what the general feeling is each time you go over it. Make changes as you see fit.

And one last thing.
Try to keep it short and sweet.

You don't have to worry too much about sounding a shay bit cheesy or mushy.
Its better still if you can manage to tickle her funny bone.
In fact, its best if you can crack her up.

Goodluck and happy writing.

2006-08-23 14:59:27 · answer #2 · answered by Saffren 7 · 1 0

Mister write what u feel like writing

2006-08-24 06:27:18 · answer #3 · answered by Star_Night 5 · 0 0

Write something that you feel; don't just get random words. Only you know your relationship, and only you can express your feelings toward it. use past experiences as refrences, and mention how much him/her means to you.

2006-08-23 15:20:54 · answer #4 · answered by swimmergirl4@verizon.net 2 · 0 0

star_night is right. write YOUR OWN feeling.

2006-08-25 07:13:26 · answer #5 · answered by Kanda 5 · 0 0

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