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about teen's life,,,

2006-08-22 21:45:59 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

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okay here is the story...,,
there was a boy n a girl who separated when they were young. They were both in love and they knew each other feelings. d boy went to america. d girl won't never forget the boy because she's quite sure that she won't meet d boy anymore. then she had a bf. one day, both d grl n d boy, met each other. they both knew it was their friend. d boy still had the same feeling as it was. d girl had had a bf. but bcoz she never forget about th boy, so deeply inside her heart, she still love him. but then she has this commitment; she already has the bf's love n she wouldn't let go of it. so they kept their dating. but d boy, who knew exactly d girl heart, kept trying to win her heart. so the conflict is about the boy who tries 2 win d girl's heart. at last, the boy gave up because he didn't want to hurt her feelings. but b4 he left, he told her that he loves her very much, in front of thousands of people in the mall. so there they were... both lives in sadness... the girl were sorry, but she still in that commitment so she tried to be her bf's gf.
I named this short story as 'Unforgettable' because i want to add part when the boy sang 'Unforgettable' to the girl. romantic huh?

2006-08-25 14:09:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Ironically, whatever it is you should start writing it by knowing how you will end it. There are plenty of subjects for this, but the "engine" that drives a story is "conflict" - Kathy loves Jeff, but Jeff doesn't love her, Bill wants to become a basketball star but doesn't have enough raw talent (but he could practice and get better)... find something that you are concerned about and use it as your primary theme. Then try add the little details that make a story more interesting, like one of your characters will only wear blue jeans, or something like that. Good luck!

2006-08-23 04:54:11 · answer #2 · answered by Paul H 6 · 0 0

guy and gal of different religions. guy an atheist and girl a staunch believer and a prude. she does not like sex and thinks it is sin to intercourse.after their marriage the boy could not enjoy sexual life due to frigidity of wife. he misunderstands that she fell in love with other boy belonging to her religion. to solve their problems, guy posts a question on yahoo answers and the reply of a psychotherapist makes his problem solved. the girl also browses the same question and opens her eyes and realizes that sex with husband is not a sin. both the couple after finding the address of the psychologist goes to his house to find out the truth that the psychologist got divorce as his wife was also a prude. and hates sex.how is it?

2006-08-23 04:58:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I can't tell you exactly what to write, but if you put a conflict in your story that the hero/heroine can't resolve, your story will definitely get read. Make his/her situation worse/more complicated until the end of the story and you will have instant success.

2006-08-23 04:54:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Actually you could write about the war between the clicks and stereo type the heck out of it...Maybe culminating with them working together on something or against something like parents or teachers....

2006-08-23 04:55:48 · answer #5 · answered by targin1 1 · 0 0

make it really random and funny.trust me. teens are like the most random people on earth.

2006-08-23 04:52:14 · answer #6 · answered by wheezy baby 4 · 0 0

Always begin with what you know. Yourself, your life, your passions, etc. Make it real... mostly. :-D

2006-08-23 04:53:23 · answer #7 · answered by LL 2 · 0 0

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