Shadows
Shadows upon you shadows on the wall
All along the rooftop I hear my echo call
It cries out to me Boy cant you see
You’re in danger now with now one else around
I stand alone with no one on my side
As empty as I feel are the thoughts I hide
Abandon this dreamscape as the dawn arrives
I’m buried in deep wishes just trying to survive
Standing all alone fearing long lost time
Passion for life the world just spins around
I stand alone with no one on my side
As empty as I feel are the thoughts I hide
Ancient buried treasures across the desert sky
Tainted with one goal to find my alibi
Seamless whispers shroud my current state of mind
I feel the end is near passing by blows so kind ...
in my state of mind
Shadows upon me Shadows on the wall
All along the rooftop I hear my echo call
It cries out to me Boy cant you see
You’re in danger now with no one else around
I stand alone with no one on my side
As empty as I feel are the thoughts Iv'e cried
As empty as I feel
Are the thoughts I hide
2006-08-22 18:25:37 · 22 answers · asked by arenaimage 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
You know what, I love these lyrics.They relate to what I'm feeling right now. :)
2006-08-22 18:28:11 · answer #1 · answered by yumyum 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think of your lyrics are greater desirable as poetry than a music. i think of of music lyrics being cooler (much less consistent emotional stuff and lots greater cool included) and consistent with danger greater precis or meandering... consistent with danger you ought to attempt dissecting a huge-unfold music and evaluate it to yours in terms of style etc... take the lyrics from a huge-unfold music like 'the strokes - is this it' or 'clear out - take a photograph' or 'foo fighters - everlong' don't be discouraged although. writing poetry and lyrics is exciting, and expressing your self is a distinctive characteristic of being a human, and being alive. whether you're in basic terms writing for your self, you will experience lots greater desirable writing some thing than no longer something in any respect!
2016-10-02 10:38:36 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 on a 10 pt. scale
2006-08-22 19:07:44 · answer #3 · answered by No Saint 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
hey its pretty good:) from the scale of 1 - 10, 10 being the highest i would rate it w/ an 8;)
2006-08-22 18:49:04 · answer #4 · answered by felice 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it seem empty like u could use something else in the middle it started off like ok then in the middle it get u into it then it goes flat and dull at the end need more work but its good do it over
2006-08-22 18:29:12 · answer #5 · answered by vetta b 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
on a scale of 1-10 i give it an 8.5 i could definately rock out to that
2006-08-22 18:59:16 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hey man dont let every one read this they could steal it from you.
But its very good! 8 or 9
2006-08-22 19:47:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I GIVE U A 10.
2006-08-22 19:10:26 · answer #8 · answered by ash07 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
10 +++++++++++ i love it
2006-08-22 18:31:56 · answer #9 · answered by fear_fox 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it seems good to me, if your band is like Alice in Chains.
One thing, though, are your thoughts really empty? how sad to be empty minded.....
2006-08-22 18:31:30 · answer #10 · answered by wisdom is my signature 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋