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This story is about a teen age girl who witnesses the shooting of her mother, and is forced to shoot her mother's murderer, to save her own life. She then has to move from L.A to England to live with her only living relative, her 60 year old grandmother who she never met. Also living there is her cousin, who is the same age and who is completly different from the main character. They fight and play tricks on each other, but are forced to work together to save their grandmother's house, since she cannot afford to keep it much longer.

2006-08-22 14:02:15 · 13 answers · asked by Music~Is~Life! 2 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

13 answers

This is a great plot, and it sounds like it will lend itself to some really good character development. If this is something you are writing/thinking of writing, keep at it! It's a gream premise!

2006-08-22 15:37:58 · answer #1 · answered by CurlyGirl21 2 · 0 0

sure sounds ok, but I think you can still make it a little better. Keep working on it. have some of your friends or family read it. Ask theme what they think. Hopefully they will give you some ideas to make it better.

Best of Luck!!!

2006-08-23 03:26:27 · answer #2 · answered by bloom_luvr 1 · 0 0

What's the title? Who's the author? Where can I get it?

2006-08-22 15:07:12 · answer #3 · answered by Wealthy Man 2 · 0 0

Sounds like a good plot - get writing.

2006-08-22 16:08:19 · answer #4 · answered by Tina K 3 · 0 0

It's a good plot and if written interestingly would be read.

2006-08-22 14:05:24 · answer #5 · answered by eugene65ca 6 · 0 0

Oh I would...
Are you going to write it? Or is it already written?
Please tell me the title and the author.
thx...

:D

2006-08-22 21:54:49 · answer #6 · answered by ira a 4 · 0 0

yeah... sounds like it would be good... is it something you are writing or is it a book you read?

2006-08-22 14:07:47 · answer #7 · answered by mortilyn77 2 · 0 0

r u writing this? coz if u r it is absolutely brilliant and i would love to raed it.....

2006-08-22 14:30:33 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

i would definitely read that, i wish i knew what it was called.

2006-08-22 17:30:30 · answer #9 · answered by MisscOOlio 2 · 0 0

yeah i would read it. what's the title?

2006-08-22 15:58:11 · answer #10 · answered by aznbuddy 3 · 0 0

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