tell me what u think... i thought of it a half hour ago.
i see you smile at me,
with in the crowd,
it takes alittle pain away,
that smile that knows no wrong,
i never told you what happend,
but you still,
find the right words to say,
and this is new today,
you showed me better,
than what i thought i knew,
im over him,
and i want to be with you,
it was hard enough ,
letting go,
then trying to forget,
what i used to know,
you had that nice side i never knew,
i never knew,
i never noticed it before,
you just came out of the blue,
you showed me light,
with in the dark,
and now i can see,
that missing spark
sorry if i didnt spell anything right
2006-08-22 10:37:40 · 12 answers · asked by Scarlet5 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
just to let people know its not religious realted its just about a guy at my school that i really like.
2006-08-22 11:07:52 · update #1
I think it would make a great song. ^_^
2006-08-22 10:41:41 · answer #1 · answered by Nikki 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As I read it, it sounds like it would be absolutely perfect for a song. Naturally, I believe that any poem can become a song and vise versa. If you find the right rythym, those words can turn into a beautiful song.
2006-08-22 17:41:22 · answer #2 · answered by lady_ellie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWEEE! That's beautiful! Definitely a song! I could hear it in my head as I was reading it. A really nice slow song.....Just pick a chorus with what you already have or come up with one.
2006-08-22 17:39:48 · answer #3 · answered by Brooke's Mommy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
girl that should defaintly be a song! Would you mind if i copied it down somewhere? If not then send me a copy of it at preppy_taylor@yahoo.com
2006-08-22 17:44:44 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry...unless you already by the melody to go with it and have a chorus in mind.
2006-08-22 17:58:36 · answer #5 · answered by ADF 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thinkit would be great eather way,your a great wrighter.but if i was to choose i would make it into a song.
2006-08-22 17:40:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
leave it as it is, its just teenaged angst poetry, and isn't worth being put to music. but then, most new songs today aren't worth being put to music, either
2006-08-22 17:45:34 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
song
2006-08-22 17:39:28 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yep, for sure it's a song.
2006-08-22 17:41:47 · answer #9 · answered by AmySue 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh my gosh! that is a beautiful song and if it sells i will buy a cd.god bless your beautiful soul!
2006-08-22 17:51:03 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋