"Sweet Nomination"
Party up/Party down/The party's all around*Party up/Party down/party do the wave now*
Just relax/you don't look stupid/get on your feet/and move to the beat*party like this is your first time/or like it could be your last, chance to dance/don't worry, i know u'll kick a**!!
~*All i wanted, was for you to have fun. so go have fun like this:*~
***Party up! Party down! The party's all around!!
Party up! Party down! Hey, come on; let's do the wave now!***(come on come on. come on come on.)
what do u think of it?? i also have guitar for it!!
2006-08-22 08:35:43 · 21 answers · asked by skateboarder289 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I wrote them myself, and i can play the guitar for it!!
2006-08-22 08:36:18 · update #1
Also, I mean "What do you think OF my lyrics" not IF
2006-08-22 08:36:47 · update #2
Youre song probably really rocks. The lyrics rhyme and they go somewhere. You can have a lot of fun with this song. Go tear it up.
2006-08-22 09:05:25 · answer #1 · answered by M2J 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, The lyrics are good. Try to add as many backup sounds you can with the guitar. Or if you can get a access to a keyboard you can make background beats and other sound. Just play with the song and try to tweak it to the best of you ability. You can do anything your heart desires. Good luck.
2006-08-22 16:04:40 · answer #2 · answered by artgophknight 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dont play it on a guitar because it wont sound right, This lyric would go really good with dance/electronica/trance beat its how the lyric goes that i can see it playing in a club or a rave.
2006-08-22 15:50:06 · answer #3 · answered by porcelain 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well being in production and being a dj i would say it needs some work! its also a little immature, i mean the way the lyrics sound! this is just constructive criticism i'm not saying don't keep doing what your doing, because it takes heart to put it all out there!!! keep it up!
p.s (u need a second verse and a breakdown)
2006-08-22 15:47:22 · answer #4 · answered by D J Kaz 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet Skateboarder 28, It sounds really good, but make sure you get the copy right, you don't want anyone 'cashing in' on your talent, 7 more good songs you'll have a top 10 cd.
2006-08-22 15:48:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
They are pretty solid. They would be good for a pop song. Something with a heavy beat and some acoustic guitar behind it. Yeah, I can see it working as a feel good song.
2006-08-22 15:42:45 · answer #6 · answered by cannonball 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good,well thought,but in my opinion you should add on to the song,the beginning & end come to fast.
Good Luck & Best Wishes-
2006-08-22 15:43:27 · answer #7 · answered by Jeremy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
could be improved! but the song all rides on how the lyrics blend with the rhythm pace & tempo of the music!
2006-08-22 15:46:30 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad. Good for you to be willing to publish.
2006-08-22 15:43:10 · answer #9 · answered by baseball nut 11 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cool,rhymes aswell,but would it go well playing a guitar with it?
2006-08-22 15:42:30 · answer #10 · answered by xxpimpet_4_lifexx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋