I want ur advice on this song I wrote...
I try not to worry
about what happens next
but everytime I get alone
I can't seem to forget
Your the one who makes me laugh
and the one who makes me cry
You give me will to carry on
When I don't wanna try
But if something should happen
to seperate us two
I wonder would it change
the way I feel for you
If I lose you
Will my life be the same
Will my heart still skip a beat
Everytime I hear your name
If I lose you
Will my tears still fall like rain
Will I put up a smile
Though I'm covered in my pain
If I lose you??
Well troubles come and troubles go
and we still stay together
Is it true that true love lasts
from now until forever??
I keep hope that we won't lose
This gift that God has given
But I'm not one who deserves
This precious life I'm livin
I won't regret whats happened here
The way I felt for you
And I won't forget those happy times
I know you felt it too
I'll still remember our first kiss
On that sunny day
I'll keep it deep inside my heart
Don't think it'll fade away
Rainy nights won't get me down
Yea I'll be just fine
I'll reminisce on our first love
the smile inside shall shine
2006-08-21 19:09:26 · 9 answers · asked by theblonchic 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
PULL IT OFF BEFORE SOMEONE STEALS IT AND PARIS HILTON SINGS IT.
2006-08-21 19:13:40 · answer #1 · answered by smiley_girl 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Personally, as a somewhat older adult (45) I like it. I would love to hear someone put it to music. Of course it would also depend if you chose to use it as a fast song or a ballad (I would chose)
2006-08-21 19:35:06 · answer #2 · answered by BONNI 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is soo cute! i LOVE it! check out mine! im posting it in a second
2006-08-24 15:11:56 · answer #3 · answered by ♥ HeartStolen ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this seems very honest and heartfelt,i think it will reach people and they will respond to it,,
2006-08-21 19:17:38 · answer #4 · answered by easyasalife 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like you can give it a pop/rnb sound...good luck!
2006-08-21 19:15:45 · answer #5 · answered by invisigoth208 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
can't wait to hear it put to music.
2006-08-21 19:13:28 · answer #6 · answered by sweets 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWESOMEEEEEE I ITE GET U A RECORD DEAL:)))
2006-08-21 19:17:20 · answer #7 · answered by Giovani 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ooo thanks for my new song!!!
Just kidding but for real you shouldn't be posting song lyrics online!!!
good song
2006-08-21 19:15:36 · answer #8 · answered by meekyle22 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, i don't like song lyrics. thanks for asking.
2006-08-21 19:13:54 · answer #9 · answered by nobudE 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋