You dreamed a dream.
You release,
A feeling,
that you feel.
You show
your emotions,
Only if there real.
You ask,
a question,
is this really life?
You wait,
and see,
if you are really right.
You breathe,
A sigh
of frustration, but relief.
You see,
no hope
so your emotions are released.
You wait,
then sleep,
And let your feelings blow away.
You dreamed,
A dream,
And you felt less afraid.
You awoke,
and knew exactly,
what to do.
Never worry about a thing,
Cuz you'll be dreaming soon.
2006-08-21 17:33:39 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
no--------then I went back and read it again ----------------------sort of, it's one to think on.
2006-08-21 17:41:02 · answer #1 · answered by remembertnb 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes I liked this poem. I thought it had feelings to it and your heart is wide to words so keep writing k?
2006-08-22 01:08:14 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bit shallow....but good try. There is rooms for improvement.
2006-08-22 00:44:02 · answer #3 · answered by Bright 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes I really like it, it is ethereal. Lovely
2006-08-22 05:31:53 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice! You can perfect it a bit more - if you feel like.
2006-08-22 02:00:53 · answer #5 · answered by Kanda 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cool
2006-08-22 00:54:54 · answer #6 · answered by Rock z 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad
2006-08-22 00:42:47 · answer #7 · answered by knd25th 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sure did you write it ?
2006-08-22 00:43:00 · answer #8 · answered by me 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋