someoen fix this?

Question

In Cedric’s situation as a member of the honor roll class consisting a mere 79 students of a combined 1,389; distinctiveness was dangerous resulting in name calling or potentially physical abuse (pg 4).

Answer 1

As one of the 79 students in the honor roll class of a school of 1,389, Cedric suffered the dangers of distinctiveness: name calling and potential physical abuse (pg 4).

If this is about a literary work, this should be written in the literary present tense. Thus,

As one of the 79 students in the honor roll class of a school of 1,389, Cedric suffers the dangers of distinctiveness: name calling and potential physical abuse (pg 4).