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A brave man he was said to be,
He told me he wanted to prove it to me.
Later on our home we left.
So he could demonstrate his deft
Of movement and of skill,
With any man he could kill.

Ok, thats a follow up from my last question so if you didn't read that you probably don't know what I'm talking about...but is that better? Its suppose to be sort of cheesy because I'm suppose to be comparing it to this arrogant king who slays a dragon (I won't go into great details)....but like I said, if you didn't read my last question read it before you answer this one...thanks!

2006-08-21 14:23:37 · 2 answers · asked by Danielle 1 in Education & Reference Homework Help

2 answers

That is pretty good

how is mine?

Once I saw a gooberladoo
He looked like he escaped from the zoo
He Said I'm hungry I will eat you
I will make some Andrew Stew
Oh Gooberladoo,
Oh Gooberladoo
I am not meaty enough for your stew
But don't worry
You can eat my brother Matthew

2006-08-21 14:48:45 · answer #1 · answered by tubasteve 2 · 0 0

I really like both .... keep going because it's really good... l would like to read it when you finish it... ;)

2006-08-21 22:27:46 · answer #2 · answered by BrAd 2 · 0 0

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