Roger Johnson: a married man for 5 years, a psyhcologist, and a man whose world would take a twisting turn.
at the age of just 34 years of age Roger was a happy man that until his 5 year marrige with his wife was coming to an end not only that but he was fired from his job after being accused of sexual harrasment to a teenage girl. Roger was lost so he decides to take a road trip all by himself, roger heads for tennesse, nashvillle where he will encounter friends and enimies
but the benefits of the trip is simple. Roger is comletley lost and needs to find himself, find his true indentity.
the story is called: The Juorney.
2006-08-21 05:36:12 · 9 answers · asked by garnes d 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I know you're really trying hard, but you have so many spelling and gramatical errors- it would be very hard for anyone to take you seriously. Your really good new story needs some polish. Try again.
2006-08-21 05:46:25 · answer #1 · answered by gmpranis1 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2006-08-21 05:42:32 · answer #2 · answered by klm 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with the 5. It's been done upside down and all around. And the title..Nahhhh..
You really need to work on your spelling and grammar.
Keep trying and good luck.
2006-08-21 05:56:13 · answer #3 · answered by Jessie P 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-08-24 15:37:31 · answer #4 · answered by authorspost 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, I am being honest, its a little too boring for me. I would give it a 3 or 2 or something.
2006-08-21 05:57:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with coffeekitten - cliche. Been there, done that... rate it a 1.
2006-08-21 06:02:10 · answer #6 · answered by RDW928 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
3
I will most certainly want to read the book "The Juorney."
2006-08-21 10:54:26 · answer #7 · answered by she who is awesome 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10 definitely. That was a great story.
2006-08-21 05:45:01 · answer #8 · answered by M. L. B! 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Uh, as far as the title goes, can you say cliched???
2006-08-21 05:45:04 · answer #9 · answered by Smiles Like She Means It 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋