Right are good to you. It's for a religious blog im starting. It's like a summary of the blog.
Religion was supposed to fade away as globalization and freedom spread. Instead, it's booming around the world, often deciding who gets elected. And the divine intervention is just beginning. Join in as try to be as unbiased as possible while diverging through recent religious happenings around the world and in your own backyard.
2006-08-20 08:03:19 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Join in AND try to be...
"Diverging" is not the word you want. Maybe...
- reading about
- studying
- familiarizing yourself with
2006-08-20 11:11:27 · answer #1 · answered by keepsondancing 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Religion was supposed to fade away as globalization and freedom spread. Instead it is booming around the world, often deciding who gets elected. And the divine intervention is just beginning. Join in as we try to be as unbiased as possible while diverging through recent religious happenings around the world and in your own backyard.
try not to use contractions when you are posting for the public to view something...good luck with your blog
2006-08-20 08:13:11 · answer #2 · answered by one_sera_phim 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Everything is fine except that last sentence.
Did you mean to say, "Join in *and* try to be as unbiased as possible..."?
Also, I don't know how a person can diverge through something. Do you mean "discussing recent religious happenings"? or dissecting them? or something else?
2006-08-20 08:41:26 · answer #3 · answered by gburgmommy 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The last sentence has problems, especially the "join in as try" part. Do you mean "join in and try".
And "diverging" can't be used in this way. Try another verb.
2006-08-24 06:16:34 · answer #4 · answered by drshorty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't understand the last sentence.
2006-08-20 08:10:02 · answer #5 · answered by puma 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i like it but, i didnt get the join in as try part. great paragraph, and wat u wrote is true. good luck on your website!!!! (dont mind my spelling errors!!)
2006-08-20 08:10:58 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋