Martin and Lucy, remind me of Mohammad ally,
Their fly like butterflies,
And their sting like bees,
And they are very, very sweet little honey bees.
2006-08-20 06:36:42 · 17 answers · asked by pixie007 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Martin and Lucy, like Muhammed Ali
Fly like a butterfly
And sting like a bee
Theyre quick on their feet
And how,so,so sweet
A champion pair if ever they where
and yes, i did!
2006-08-20 06:45:05 · answer #1 · answered by minesaphatone 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Martin and Lucy sometimes act so bad,
Having Mike Tyson here would make me glad,
Instead of scolding and spanking of rears,
Mike will dish out punches and bite off ears.
2006-08-20 13:45:37 · answer #2 · answered by Jdude 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You might want to learn how to spell before writing poetry. It helps.
His last name is Ali.
Not Ally.
2006-08-20 13:42:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Have you ever considered learning to spell correctly, punctuate properly, and construct grammatically? Your poem is rubbish, absolute tripe.
2006-08-20 14:22:31 · answer #4 · answered by Phish 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bad spelling, bad grammar, but otherwise okay! Its the thought that counts and this shows your love for them!
2006-08-20 13:45:41 · answer #5 · answered by Paul B 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Short and sweet...very nice
2006-08-20 13:40:38 · answer #6 · answered by Spacysam 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice
you are a credit to your children
2006-08-20 13:45:22 · answer #7 · answered by MaxD148 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dunno...
i dont really think it makes a whole lot of sense...
it doesnt seem very kid like either...
2006-08-20 13:42:56 · answer #8 · answered by ketchupmustardrelish36 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its nice, quite sweet
2006-08-20 13:41:55 · answer #9 · answered by Heidi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes very good try another
2006-08-20 13:42:23 · answer #10 · answered by paulette7618 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋