How could this happen
There is nothing left in me
I wish you could be her holing me in your arms saying I love you
Cuz thats all I need to make it
You being gone is killing me inside
I feel like I could have done more
eating me little by little
I can't get you out of my mind
Today was surpose to be your birthday
I miss you so much
I love you so much
I just wish I had a chance to say I love you
I want you to be here
But your died
I wish you weren't
I feel like am deid too
I just wanted to say I love you
But its too late
Now I feel like am empty
There is nothing left fo me
How could this happen so fast
Without me not even saying goodbye
Can you hear me
Can you hear my voice
Do you feel me
Do you
How could this happen so fast
right before my eyes
2006-08-19 07:01:18 · 6 answers · asked by Krazy 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
[ Its about missing this person who was so close to you one day just waking up ther deid you feeling that was not surpose to be them it happen right in your eyes you wanted to stop it but you stood ther and did nothing you feel guilty for that You love her and miss her but you never had a chance to say it] Thats what it about
2006-08-19 07:04:55 · update #1
I am sorry for your loss, I have been there myself so I can very much relate to what you are going through, it will get better with time, it hears stupid out at first, but it will my friend!
I thought your song was very good, You have a talent, but don`t go around and blame yourself, cause all is easy to say after when all know. Sometimes it is hardest to see if you stand close.
I hope you will continue to write!
peace and love from Norway!
2006-08-19 07:24:13 · answer #1 · answered by thefallen 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A good one,if not beautiful,ma'am. But a suggestion, and I mean no offense by this, you ought to change your hairstyle. If the hairstyle in your avatar is anything to go by, it seems you started grieving a long time ago. Oh and the the "Do you" line in the third from last line should be removed. It sounds odd, even when sung.
2006-08-19 14:10:05 · answer #2 · answered by cradle2resurrection 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a really good song!
there are a few grammatical errors tho, like but your died should be either you died or you're dead
but other than those few mistakes it sounds like it go somewhere!
u r doing the right thing to get started tho by having ppl look at it
wut kind of music wouldu put it to?
i hope my advice helps!
2006-08-19 14:09:25 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful lyrics. I would really like to hear some of your songs.
2006-08-19 14:07:45 · answer #4 · answered by lj1 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a very good song. the lyrics are very sad, and they have really good meaning. i'd really like to hear some of your songs too.
2006-08-19 14:12:10 · answer #5 · answered by Alys 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok
2006-08-19 14:06:08 · answer #6 · answered by 4 strings 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋