I'm writing an Album of 14 songs.The questions is what do you think of this? it's too big for the yahoo thing so it'll be posted in halves.
Flames of Change
When the world decides to change
And we all come together
When our world is lost in flames
And we rebuild another
Though all our hopes are out of range
Just keep reaching for it
We will get through these flames of change
For a future that’s fit
Love your sons and daughters
Preventing what never came
Cry for all the slaughters
That helped grow this flame
Though all our hopes are out of range
Just keep reaching for it
We will get through these flames of change
For a future that’s fit
2006-08-19 05:34:37 · 16 answers · asked by rm2kdark_lord 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Nothing lasts forever
Just keep your faith
Let’s all stand together
Let’s all keep faith
With a future that’s so dim
We can still hope to change
It’s hard with everything so grim
Know the end is in range
Though all our hopes are out of range
Just keep reaching for it
We will get through these flames of change
For a future that’s fit
Though all our hopes are out of range
Just keep reaching for it
We will get through these flames of change
For a future that’s fit
2006-08-19 05:34:44 · update #1
Wow!! you are super talented and thats an awesome song, i cant wait to hear it on my local radio station or see the video when you hit big time, good luck and god bless.
2006-08-19 05:42:02 · answer #1 · answered by champagne 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow! Really good lyrics there! Gotta say I wish I could write that well. My only question for you is what kind of music will these lyrics be to? I'd say put it up against a nice strong guitar reff with strong heavy metal vocals. Good bass and a strong beat on the drums. Lots of bass drum.
2006-08-19 05:48:18 · answer #2 · answered by freddyboy0729 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have a bright future ahead of you. Keep up the good work and may God bless you.
2006-08-19 05:45:21 · answer #3 · answered by sam 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hope this hits the big time. You're a brilliant writer. Keep up the good work.(",)
2006-08-19 05:49:31 · answer #4 · answered by *333Half-Evil* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow ! I like it ..
By the way, I write poems but in French!!
2006-08-19 05:44:39 · answer #5 · answered by Marie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats nice dude.Keep doing the nice work.
2006-08-19 05:43:16 · answer #6 · answered by LANCE 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You really have talent and you should go really far.
Good luck and keep it up!!
2006-08-19 05:41:29 · answer #7 · answered by oh-so- Laid-back 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You're a talented writer. Keep doin' what you're doin'.
2006-08-19 05:40:06 · answer #8 · answered by mysonsablessing 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's more like poetry then a song sorry
2006-08-19 05:42:12 · answer #9 · answered by shariecollins2 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That's awesome!
2006-08-19 05:40:35 · answer #10 · answered by Aidan Jonas 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋