Rise and shine,
new friend of mine.
The next twenty-four
are yours to endure.
Wake with a cheshire grin
and dismiss all the night screams
still hidden within.
Open those lids,
and spead out those wings.
Shine in the eyes,
is such a ticklish sting.
See what I see,
hope what I hope.
Agree to disagree?
Hope for this sappy dope.
The next 24,
are ours to adore.
No agenda, no chore,
no seconds left to forget or right to ignore.
Keep looking,
as the heavens go from light to dark blue.
Til the stars start to sleep
and the moons begins its nap.
And I again wish a good morrow to you.
2006-08-19 03:44:04 · 10 answers · asked by JekYLL'sHyDe 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Thanx for the positive input...no worries...i have most of my stuff registered with the writers guild.
2006-08-19 03:58:06 · update #1
Look, you open yourself to some problems. You should not put anything of this sort for public consumption without properly registering it.
Tell you why: Good lyrics are snapped up pretty quickly. If it becomes famous, you have no claim to it and then you are not going to be a happy camper. What if, this becomes a multimillion dollar seller? - and you have no recourse to collect it.
Protect yourself.
I read thru it. It is good.
2006-08-19 03:54:32 · answer #1 · answered by Nightrider 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like a song! I think it's good, I mean, I'm only guessing what it means, but sometimes with a song the only person who truly understands it is the writer. Or it could simply be a poem, with which I think the same thing applies. I like it!
2006-08-19 03:51:49 · answer #2 · answered by Atlas 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It thing that you will be a good poet in the near future.
2006-08-19 03:51:51 · answer #3 · answered by nick 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
cool ... I agree with whoever said it sounds like a song.
2006-08-19 04:18:04 · answer #4 · answered by tigglys 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That really good I like it alot. You have anymore?
2006-08-19 03:50:30 · answer #5 · answered by GERRI B 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice confident poem good
2006-08-19 03:58:18 · answer #6 · answered by cipotli 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
kinda cute rayray
2006-08-19 03:50:42 · answer #7 · answered by curiousgeorge 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good!
2006-08-19 03:49:25 · answer #8 · answered by Christy W 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awesome! Thanks for a great read, that was perfect to go with my morning fresh brewed coffee! Thanks for asking. Woo-hoo!
2006-08-19 03:52:25 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
sound neat
2006-08-19 05:28:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋